Hey Nam, so this is my review for your story! :)
The story is good. It's a romance flick kind of novel, and you definitely got that part right down. It was well written, and the characters are flesh out, so they feel alive to me as I read the story. That's a good plus.
Writing quality, updates, story development, and world background are all given a 4/5 stars. Characters design is the 5/5 for me. Overall, a good story for those who want romance novels. I feel like this novel is going to be short, based on what I saw on the description, but it has a potential to be a good novel and that's what matters for me. Readers who are into romance will like this novel if they want a short but good read.
Nam, I wish you a good luck in finishing this novel. Have a nice day! :D
Regius_Sanguis