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I don't even know how to start, this book begins like every other book, a seemingly normal video game alternate reality life.
But then the author takes it a step further and makes this alternate reality *reality* and this is where things start happening, its is like the unvailing of a mystery slowly showing its true colours (I can't think of a better analogy for this); suddenly this book is not so simple or normal anymore, its no longer like every other book as everything begins to revolve around a single entity *FATE*
Unfortunately the book is still in the hatching stage and only a few cracks have appeared on its shell but this is a book worthy of reading, probably worthy of being best seller if that concept exists in web novel.
The character's are well developed and have the depth of actual living human beings.
The plot setting is also well made with no holes detected yet (although I'm not a professional so I may be wrong)
The writing style is neat and easy to understand, no unaccounted names flying around
I would even suggest this book go premuim if I wasn't so poor and don't want to give it up anytime soon(quite selfish of meπ).
At first this novel was good and unique, he died, got the body of one op demon and that's the end of this novel being good,,
it turn to your typical novel where mc is supposed to be strong but its not.
before he died him and his group met a demon in the beginning this demon was so op that no one in his party could beat him they had to result on letting the demon killed mc so he can go away.
after his real life death is that same demon body he got plus some ultra power, so you would think mc is stronger! nope he got his ass beat by one of his x party members.. it turns out that cause this party member who is a girl and got a pussy and mc is a masochist i guess author decided yeah lets make mc weaker..
A very good story with interesting twists and not completely predictable story. Also, mc is quite intelligent and not some stupid 'hero' type character. Please don't make mc into an idiot in the future, make him pragmatic/ruthless when necessary.
very refreshing for a isekai troupe and evil main character cliche. the author mentioned that hes trying to get away from the mainstream isekai with no harem, not so overpoweredness and tries to include humor
I like the story . So far its super good and i really recommend this story to those who seek a wonderfull storyβππβπ
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Well thank you very much for the story we still need to fill to the limit
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