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HorizonCrown
I am convinced..... This book is best..... Fast pace is really nice...... Op MC..... A system.... Complete loyalty...... Above the world MC........ What I love is story development... And Back ground description..... Will be popular for sure.... ππ―π―πππππ―π―
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PsyLoRD
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Rojikku
I wanted to give this a poor review, but it's definitely at least a three star novel. If you don't mind plenty of English errors, though not the most I've ever seen, and the author having no idea how to write dialogue, then it's decent. The characters don't have much depth, it's obviously a wish fulfillment novel, and there's sort of a weak to strong vibe. In a way.
The story itself has its unique points and a bit of potential, but I really can't enjoy it. Honestly, the poor writing makes it distasteful, so I automatically feel like every character is less intelligent because their dialogue is grammatically incorrect. Author obviously isn't using spellcheck despite it being free in multiple programs.
The author has dreams, and the courage to act on them, but not the care to see that everything is written properly. I mean, he hasn't even Googled how to write dialogue, or learned by example from literally any book that isn't a play. Don't understand how that's possible, but, I'd be willing to revisit this review if some improvement was made.
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DingySongy22
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It really does seem like something worth reading so I am recommending to .......... READ READ READβββββ
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Dadumdada
Attractive summary..hmmmm...its got my attentionπ³π³
Veery very very much into reading this novelπ€¨
π HAH!π 4 sure i'll give this novel a good try I mean I have been looking for a goodΒ story. I think this is a novel I will find to be a good read in the end right? RIGHTβπ€π€π₯°heehee
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Mumyum
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Upload speed wishometer 2 chs per day, At least...plzββ
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DingDongSong
Interesting read my friend yessireee very glad to have discovered this little treasireπ its jst very awesome...everything one would want in a novelπ₯°π₯°π₯°
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Aarush
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Ekon
I will say it this is the best novel for 2019 in my opinion. I love it. All the other novel I read, I say it one of the best novel but this novel is different. To me if it continue like this, this novel will be in my top 2 out of 100 of 100 novel I have read In no time if it continue like this. πππππ
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Melady800
I really, really, really love this novel!!! Itβs one of the best novels I have read and itβs also one of my favorites!!! Although, if you could fix the part of when your summoning new subordinates, it tends to get confusing for me because itβs like itβs mushed together in my opinion, but overall itβs one of the best novels Iβve read!!!
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Younus_Mohammed
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FaFnir03
Great story. If u want something fun this is a must. A a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a s d d f f c d s s a f g h g f f d c t r s f r s s d d d e d f f d d d f f f f f f f f f f f f t f s d d d d d r r e e r r
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Daoistskyshaker
It nice and comfortable so far so good I hope you keep writing this it bring a new perspective of sorts.!!°°°°ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ§ββ€ββββββββββββββ
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Rii_sama
I love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love this novel.. Author, thank you for your hard work.. Canβt wait for more update.. β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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steeve971
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SilverBell2005
The story has a good plot and decent development. Though there are a few time skips it doesnβt give you everything at once which overloads the reader. The writing style is also pretty good. The author is kind enough to take suggestions from the readers which is an added bonus. The only issue would be the occasional grammar mistakes. Considering how often they update ad that they do it on their own plus the length of the chapters Iβm surprised itβs minor things like plurals ever now and then which shows the author is good at writing.
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jonathanobama
I guess I am addicted to reading this. I really like it and it has been a while since I have read a good novel like this and I think you should keep going the way you are!
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Sasuke77
Good novel to pass time. Good story development and character design. Excepting more exciting things to come.
Please don't drop it. Keep going.
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Jerry0
This book is amazing I need moreeeeee......a **** give him a dragon and a grim ripper summoning dammit
And give him a monster magician too hahahaha
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HorizonCrown
I read this book.... Like to say it has potential..... It has many plots..... It's good that writer is making fast process for MCs childhood...... But i would like u to slow down.
... When he reaches age of 15....,very nice book.. Should read........
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Taf
I like the major idea of this novel and the road you decided to take for the MC. The only problem is the slightly bad grammar, although it readable if you had some kind of editor it would be better.
Overall it's really good, and it is pretty easy to get addicted to the story. At least for me it was
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Panon_
Good Novel.
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swiftrain
It's a good story based from the development of story and also interesting story background
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MH_Fahim
It's not that bad....actually it is quite good...I will just request you to don't drop it.....it's really annoyingπ
...well keep up the good work......
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PROCELL
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Tartarus
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