Writing Quality improves relatively quickly and becomes more expressive. Update stability is outstanding, two chapters a day so far. Story development is stable, a bit fast paced, but nominal. Character design, descriptions could need a bit more sprucing, even though it wasn't until recently anyone more was introduced, but overall they're good.
The system has a distinct personality and is highly interactive, and world background hasn't really been shared just yet. Hoping for more!
< Shamelessly slapping five stars on my own product. >
< Hope you don't mind. >
< Leave me some good grub.. I mean yeah... Food would do! >
< But really, leave me something constructive! >
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