Reviews of Dawn of the First Emperor

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TaintedMetal
For the most part, the story does give out an intriguing premise. I like the ideas that are flowing throughout this novel as well as the concept. However, I have my share of criticism towards the execution. There are plenty walls of text, and it took me a while to fully grasp what was going on. The synopsis itself is clear but the chapters made me check twice even three times to understand it fully. Characters are clear as well as the world. Despite my criticism I do see the potential in this story, which is why best of luck to the author to continue this novel.
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AimeeLynn
I had a blast reading this. The author includes notes that are very humorous, and the character narrates to the reader as if he's a friend who's telling you a story. This is a big world, with a lot of movement, you'll need to concentrate. But good for anyone looking for adventure and a laugh.
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Nekoman
This novel is good, very detailed at every aspect. Some kind of old time, original isekai it seems, really is my taste. I don't know what to say anymore, but this novel id really recommended by me! Give it a chance at least :D
1mth
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MisterFlare
I hate to leave of a rough review on a fellow author's novel, especially one who took the time to review my own book, but I'm not gonna hold my punches either. The first few chapters I've been able to read were very hard to follow, the grammar isn't atrocious, but it isn't exactly one of the seven wonders of the world either. On top of that, chapters one to four are almost completely redundant because you outline them in the synopsis. I understand that setting context is important, but you could've just started the story at Chapter Five, and it would have been far less confusing.
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bibiyenini
It was gonna be a tragic ahead if he found himself transmigrated to another world. I like the way you intrigued the readers who like transmigration plotlines and think that you updated these last 4 months ago! Way to go with that, author, you should keep up the best and write what you have in heart.
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4mth
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Ainzooalgown
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Shining
Hey Author! I completely enjoyed while reading this story. I have to commened your efforts for writing such fun and fantastic story. This story is good choice for the ones who loves history and Over Powered male lead. Character design, Writing quality is very good and flawless. World background is very interesting ❤️
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cecemagic_sempai
I enjoyed this story so far, it's funny and MC is "strong-opinionated", smart and has depth, unlike a lot of stories where character building is not strong. The writing is good, and it keeps your attention with a lot of action and moving like how you feel when watching a movie. If you like Medieval themed story and overpowered MC this is a must-read.
7mth
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Breno_Ranyere
After reading the first 10 chapters: Overall I think it's an interesting plot. I feel that it was a risky idea starting with a war right off the bat since we had to spend so much time focusing on detailing the chaos and not enough on exploring the characters and why we should care about their deaths. That all changed when we started to focus more on Charles thought. I don't know why but I really like him. The writing quality could use some work with some paragraphs being a bit too long and having a tad too many people speaking at once (at least in the beginning), and the point of view constantly changing from the narrator in third person to first person. Also, I know its an attempt to represent people's different accents by sometimes I have no idea as to what people are saying. The plot overall seems like a fun fantasy story with interesting ideas.
7mth
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