Reviews of The Void God

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4.51

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Azazel_69
great read for me . . .
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Chouzenfox
The story starts well, good development, but then it turns to a worse ... 10-year-old MC is the biggest "stallion", but then he regrets everything and does nothing else. He never bothered to mention it but his father becomes the ultimate villain and he wants to make his 2 mothers his women "conveniently". From chapter 40 onwards it falls even further, MC who has been abused all his life (to the point of being without emotions) suddenly becomes furious for the smallest things, with S-class power he almost destroys the world, but conveniently it is prevented and nerfed in an extremely "easy" way ... I wonder if he used SSS class or fights against the strongest
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suWong
it was good while it lasted I guess overall it was good start up and also I feel like it could get better as there are normally some slow parts in a book
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Azazel_69
i cant explain why but i just like this fan-fic novel i like how the mc is op but its a shame that the author droped this NICE
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WolfFang0214
I thought this book was good and I think those who gave bad reviews it just didn’t suit their tastes if in the future you can get back in to this story i think it would continue to be good.
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DIVINE_LOLICON
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Kai_Uzumaki
I always give 5/5 but there are some really cringe scenes and some plot holes. Some scenes(Like Ichigo Vasto Lord vs MC) don't make sense but the overall story is a work of art. All in all this can be used to gain experience later when you write Fluff and Romance Scenes
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Worthless_Writer
what the **** what kind of start is that! i hold myself from stopping reading and later on the plot kinda wiggles and sometimes i realise its similar to some of stories that i read
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Lord_of_the_void
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Lord_of_the_void
Good history. ..........................................................................................................,.........................................................................................
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t650825t
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t650825t
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Persin
I'm mostly going to be talking about the MC. So in my eyes, MC is mostly a overpowered guy who is kind and gentle to his friends and lovers, but is incredibly evil and brutal to his enemies. His backstory is incredibly similar to Vahn's, but he's not nearly as nice as him. He does have some flaws though. He raped several women near the beginning of the novel, and he thinks about NTRing his father as well. He does become a better person later on, but he still takes any women he wants, regardless of whether or not they love other men in the original manga. Tgis is mostly a wish fulfillment story, so it doesn't really matter, but he's probably the most evil out of all MC'S I've seen so far. If I had to rate him on the moral scale, I would say he's Chaotic Good. The story is good and the characters besides MC do have actual development. So I think this is a good story, and I would definitely recommend reading it.
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MagikLord
Garem at 4 banging garem mothers at 10.... Garem at 4 banging garem mothers at 10.... Garem at 4 banging garem mothers at 10.... Garem at 4 banging garem mothers at 10.... Garem at 4 banging garem mothers at 10.... Garem at 4 banging garem mothers at 10.... Garem at 4 banging garem mothers at 10.... Garem at 4 banging garem mothers at 10.... Garem at 4 banging garem mothers at 10....
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idioidi
My biggest complaint with this novel is that it ended abruptly. I also wish that it had focused a bit more on the women conquering instead of other things. Overall it was enjoyable and fairly easy to read.
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Predaotr
Read this if you are fan of raping, because it seems author is fanatic of it. I managed to read this **** to 10 chapter and MC already raped like 100 girls, not to mention mind control and using slave magic on innocent woman and then claiming he loves her, like wtf?
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REKT523922
Well it was fun while it last good luck on your on story. Hope you come back and continue this story after you feel better see ya author +++
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lMonarchl
Don't let go of the romance please .......... .... .................................... ............................ ....... ....... ......... .. ...... ..
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Djabilong
This is equivalent of listening either to a politician or a winner of a beauty pageant - brain starts melting from the amount of conflicting information and constant breaking of the rules imposed by author, by author himself. First major problem is the protagonist who, I swear, must be a corpse possessed by several different people. Constantly switches between a normal weeb, a xianxia arrogant young master who magically enslaves and rapes women for fun, a shy japanese protag who blushes from a kiss to the cheek, a bastard plotting to cuck (and possibly kill) his own father, a hypocritical whiteknight who unironically condemns others for things that he himself done with glee (again, not even a deliberate play on his part - he seriously believes it in the heat of the moment), <...>. Majority of characters feel completely undeveloped, with such unimportant things like character development and world building thrown out the window in favor of breakneck speed of unexplained...things?...happening, with everything feeling like a really short one-sentense summary of three big books. "Hello, I'm a New Unexplained Character A from the original series. I'm instantly in love with you. Because reasons. I will be forgotten and never appear again after 2~3 chapters." There's no rhyme, reason or logic to be had. Economy is weird; apparently there's cultivation shoved in there somewhere that is never really addressed; somehow there's eight different types of dragon species (with another twenty elemental, unique, and titled subspecies) that kill millions even though this is modern day world and nobody ever seen a single dragon and doesn't suspect that supernatural world exists; apparently nobody gives a damn that a borderline skyscraper just *appears* overnight in the middle of a city suburb that only has 1~2 story tall buildings; <a thousand other things>. There's also a couple *alleged* things that I haven't encountered personally, but might as well give them a mention: author may or may not delete "bad" reviews (and from my knowledge of DT, he's not a person to randomly lie about such things happening). And while I admit to not reading up to that part, apparently there was world-hopping added unannounced for no reason somewhere down the line, making a big tonal shift to the narrative. Overall it feels like author is making up the story as it goes, which isn't a bad thing in itself, but only when you don't start breaking the rules you yourself made and pulling things out of thin air. *** Still, there's plenty of chapters to go by, and spelling/punctuation/grammar are readable (heck, I'd even call them stellar if compared to usual wn trash that hurts you physically just by reading it), so there's that.
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Everton_Mason
I didn't understand why the rating of this book is high. It basically looks like a superficial summary of something that could be good. The author is not concerned with adding depth, longer and more developed dialogues, personal thoughts of each character and his own traits that form his personality, there is no immersion in the story. In depth of text, it is no different from reading a medicine leaflet.
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Poseidon_God
Eu sou o exp de minha Revisão das Sagradas Escrituras. Webnovel é meu corpo, exp é meu sangue. Eu criei mais de mil críticas inúteis. Desconhecido para dormir, nem conhecido da realidade. Resisti a Cliff-Kun para criar muitas críticas. No entanto, essas mãos nunca terão nada. Então, enquanto eu oro ... Exp ilimitado funciona!
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jeanpierregerardo
more chapters. ....................................................................................................................................................................................
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Bad_Vibes_Forever
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Poseidon_God
Eu sou o exp de minha Revisão das Sagradas Escrituras. Webnovel é meu corpo, exp é meu sangue. Eu criei mais de mil críticas inúteis. Desconhecido para dormir, nem conhecido da realidade. Resisti a Cliff-Kun para criar muitas críticas. No entanto, essas mãos nunca terão nada. Então, enquanto eu oro ... Exp ilimitado funciona!
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Nyxarias
Wow nice spam bots you got there Rudra_Roy and others nice. ohh and it apears that the Author deletes your Reviews. Then again it was a nice Fan-Fic till you destroyt it with his past and ****. Ps **** you all Spam bots.┌∩┐(ಠ_ಠ)┌∩┐
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HentaiLover1
You made him random void god the you lose me and there is so much personalty issues and you take random NPC(don't know the names) in harem they don't even know each other first day school they come and said they love him and he accept WTF I mean if you have them then take the village girls that he raped too.beacuse if they f*ck other guys then that be NTR(well you understand)
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jeanpierregerardo
good. ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................
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BeautyfullGuy
stupid main hero character stupid author and stupid fan-fiction world all you write is stupid veryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryvery very stupid
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DaoistukNrUc
This story is amazing even though it is only a fanfic but the development of the characters and the theme is not predictable making this story more interesting.GOOD JOB
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