Reviews of Journey of the Great Red by Md_Omr_Alpha - Webnovel

This series sounds good, but I think the author deleted the chapters since it's finished with no chapters and others' reviews :\ Please bring them back?

An amazing novel, the only bad thing is that it was marked as complete when it seems otherwise. I find it sad that the author ended it so early.

The dao of stupidity is very very strong in this one. And trust me you don't want to read it...AT ALL! Unless you want to lose more brain cells than you can ever wish to get back then of course go ahead. And good luck going more than 2 chapters in.

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I now have another tumour after reading this. Half the shit in this novel is unnecessary and just frankly annoying but oh well, it's more of a satisfactory novel than an actual well thought out one, if your into it good for you if not, I agree with you. Have a great day.

I like this novel sbhsjdshhshsvsbdhshshshsbsbsbsbsbshzhzhhzbzbzbzbzjznznznznznznxnxbzbzbxbzbzbzbxbzbzbxbxbxbxbxbxbxbxbxbxbzbzbbzbzbxbxbxbxbxbxzbbdbdbxbxbzbx stay safe author

nah just nahh dude i already didn't like chapter 1, trash dude Im ok with harem thought but you Harem story just like...... hmm..... i don't know how describe this ...

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The F MY IMAGINATION RUN WILD THE WALLPAPER IS ALMOST LOOK LIKE A GIRL IN A NUDE 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇

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A teacher is teaching a class and she sees that Johnny isn't paying attention, so she asks him, "If there are three ducks sitting on a fence, and you shoot one, how many are left?" Johnny says, "None." The teacher asks, "Why?" Johnny says, "Because the shot scared them all off." The teacher says, "No, two, but I like how you're thinking." Johnny asks the teacher, "If you see three women walking out of an ice cream parlor, one is licking her ice cream, one is sucking her ice cream, and one is biting her ice cream, which one is married?" The teacher says, "The one sucking her ice cream." Johnny says, "No, the one with the wedding ring, but I like how you're thinking!"

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Thanks for the chapters keep writing, great work on every chapter, thanks for your hard working and hope you can publish more chapters in future...

What the **** is this novel!!? You can't just take your twin sister and make rias servant what the **** is wrong with the author!? I drop it. And I hope your novel fail and get drop too

So writing is pretty bad but a lot better then most novels. The updates are turning stable but still pretty bad imo. There is no story it's just pokemon with girls, mc becomes the Great Red and starts getting girls literally like pokemon just without pokeballs lol. There is no character MC is just a harem protag but worse since he basically doesn't even do the "I promise I'll love you all equally and cherish you". He basically uses Great Red's powers to change their "deepest desire" to wanting to give themselves completely to him, the character interactions feel mechanic at best, almost like game prompts. He also changes the reality of the universe to change all his fave characters that aren't girls into girls... No world background, Great Red is the strongest in DxD universe even the goddess says he's op and the chances of getting his body are null basically but by magic of the author it just happens... So in short pokemon with girls, if you just wanna watch the mc go around get girls like pokemon and **** this is for you, if you look for any resemblance of a story here you won't find it.

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it is very nice to read and very interesting to have somthing new the grammar is ok sometimes ther are some mistakes but thet is no problem and wen you read 1 chapter you want to read more

Too many plot holes are there & it feels like I'm reading a hentai novel. Not much character development as well as story development. Story does not seems to follow the canon & tags should be apply here is Harem, NTR, Brainwash, 18+..

Harem fic? Check, ****ty story? Check, MC always thinking about his lower half? Check, No character development? Check, Oh who I am kidding it's another ****ty dxd fanfic with the only redeeming feature is he became Great red

It's good, a new look on dxd as I've never seen a great red fanfic, so I would recommend. Only problem I could find is that the author made some pretty basic grammatical errors that could be solved with a once over or an editor, but otherwise it seems like a good read.

great book, very entertaining🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒

It's amazing it is one of the best highschool dxd fanfics I ever read so give the book and author a chance It will be worth it I promise.......

I am the dreams and the dreams are one with me................................................................................................................I am the True Red Dragon.

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