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I have definitely enjoyed reading this one. I am sad that it has been unfinished but still hope for more from author. This story is very descriptive and makes you feel like you are in the book. ๐
Needs to work grammar, however, the material is not bad. ๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โบ๏ธ๐คฉ๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คจ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โบ๏ธโบ๏ธ๐คฃ๐๐ ๐
alright story that had an interesting plot going on but then was turned trash instantly when pirates came along...
stopped reading but can guess whats going to happen from the titles.
First thing is that it makes no fcking sense. They come out of nowhere, no warning and then you have the whole 'fight' this again makes no sense as you where saying why is the captain fighting like one hundred times and not surrendering ? To force a fight scene and plot.
Secondly why is she not stating where she is going ? The merchant guild is so powerful that they an scare a demigod ****less, terrified to cross them. The pirates no matter how horny, how fcking stupid would NOT want that heat. The merchant guild will have TONS of connections from how big it is portrayed. They will risk all this for a girl ? No.... they are not that dumb from the tactics they showed. Honestly it is a stupid way to force a plot that makes no sense.
If you say they will not care ? My answer to you is are you stupid. Not to mention her aunt who would no doubt have some sort of connection she can use against measly pirates. How do you think the prestige of the merchant's are? If some pirates get away with taking one of there assets what does that portray them as ?
So much more I can say about that, but the final thing that makes me call this trash is. Mc being a slave and getting raped all the time..
It says smut yes. Thats okay were all big kids, however for me there is a line. Mc choosing to fck ? fine. Manipulating etc ? fine. Whats not fine is for her to be constantly raped, and all the sick fucks like and cheer it on, saying its such a great story.
not worth the read, unless your a sick human.
Its a really nice book would have given it more than this ,but there just too many unnecessary explanations that keeps one distracted from the main story in the process of reading them you might miss the essence of the chapter you're reading, but in all its a really interesting story.
I really have to applause the author for his/her plot. The story line is intriguing and I would have really loved this novel, if not for itโs Grammer. While I get that novels on webnovel canโt have perfect grammer; this bookโs grammer is way below the normal level of grammer seen in most webnovels. This book has potential if the author would be willing to get someone to spend a little more time to edit itโs grammer. (Or you can first type it out googledocs or smth and get grammerly to help check it(grammerly isnโt already correct, but I think it would be somewhat helpful for the author to use if he/she really doesnโt have a lot of time.) Anyways! Iโll stick around for a while, hopefully the grammer improves... :3๐
this novel is a great read, but it's in need of some good editing. the pacing is kind of fast but since I dont know how many chapters it has it probably good as is. Keep up the good work.
this story is dam good yar...
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This is a novel with an interesting plot that was ruined by bad grammar. I enjoy the game and fantasy elements immensely. However, that enjoyment gets drowned like a rat when I realised just how bad the grammar is. Even the MTL novels on this site have much better grammar...and this aspect of this novel can be solved about 50% if the author used a grammar checking device or just typed their story on microsoft word first and 100% if the author got an editor.
nice book.... should try it.
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I am the writer of the novel and I am saying that you should read it right now. It's worth your time.
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