Interesting story with a very unique plot! The chapters are long and very descriptive. I found no grammatical errors. The writer really exert effort on creating an enjoyable story! Please write more chapters!
An interesting novel with a good start!
I really like how the author describes the scenes and I'm hooked at the first chapter. I'll definitely read more!
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I'd say, among the many fantasy genre floating out there, this one has a very unique premise. The magic system is very elaborate and interesting that it opens to the reader a whole new world--something real and alive.
The characters too are unique, especially the main character and his girlfriend. I love their chemistry.
I also love the fact that the side characters didn't feel 2 dimensional and had depth in their personalities.
However, it's downside would be the grammar. The grammar needs some work, something that a writer develops as time passes on. May the ink keep writing with this one.
The story is interesting, as well as the premise. I like the mystery looming in the background.
The world too is impressive and well constructed.
However--the only downside would be the grammar, I think the author should improve on that. This is not something that is forced, it is something that grows over time. So keep up author đđđđ
A slow start but a solid run. An enjoyable story that is filled with good characters, a well written world, and nice moments all around. I recommend giving this one a read!
First of all, I love your cover, you got great skills! After I saw the cover I had my expectations and unfortunately, there were not really met (at least in the beginning). The pace was super slow, at some point, I just asked myself if I am reading a "postal sitcom" where nothing really happens, besides basic relationships between two human beings. Hopefully, things are getting better later on and who knows, maybe it is one of these novels that start all gently and will go very deep & dark haha. #Iwish
Good luck author.
That's just my opinion.
Wow! This is story is beautifully written! I like how per POV concluded with heart warming chapter. Great job author!
This story reminds me of Letter Bee Anime or Tegami Bachi. I added your novel to my library for now since I am truly hooked with your novel, and I want to see where will it go.
well, the writing quality is good and the author didn't made much grammatical errors which makes it easy for readers to grasp the story.I personally favor a romantic story and this one is one of them. It's a sweet story.The story development is also good with the characters framing around story.
Really nice!
I like how you've included the lettersâthey're really interesting.
I haven't spotted any grammatical errors and the pace of writing is perfect.
Someone who's into a real-life romance should definitely give this a try!
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While the story itself had a pretty slow start, the end of the first chapter was an incredibly effective hook, being both sad and touching. The existence of magic also adds a layer of fantasy into the story, and I cannot wait to see what will happen next.
Hi! Iove your novel! This novel has the potential to rise !! You've got amazing talent! I hope that this novel will update more chapters!! Keep up the good work!!
The romance in this novel is great and excellent! Every character is unique and described profoundly by the author. I did not notice and misspelled vocabularies and terms.
The story development has an amazing and perfect pace, and the author seems to update frequently. Readers won't get left behind.
Keep up the good work author!!!
Here... this book is very descriptive. I could conceive exactly the authors imagination. Reading thru chapter 1 to about 3 I think it worths one time. Keep it up. More chapters pls.
I'm honestly touched by the first chapter alone, I also like how well you use the first person view and narrates it in the form of a letter, the plot is interesting too, keep up the goodwork and keep the chapters coming!
The opening pace of this was very casual and slow. I kept waiting for something exciting to happen when finally, the protagonist, Kurai, was sent to deliver some pie to a boy at an abandoned train station. Which ended up being a really tragic but touching story.
It was around this time that the writer confirmed magic existed in this story. The opening few paragraphs where a âletter appeared out of nowhereâ sort of tipped me off but I wasnât quite sure.
The writer was very detail in describing the magical aspects of this story, such as the broomstick the postman uses to get around. The fact that Kurai is such a kind postman who also uses dark magic was very unique and exciting.
I donât usually read these type of novels but I could recommend it to everyone here in WN who just want to relieve stress as they read. The story is immersing with descriptive elements that are just detailed enough without dragging the plot and pacing behind. The characters have a depth to them as well.
Overall a promising read.
Itâs a very captivating story. I love how the author described the events and situations. The exchanging messages of Aoko and Kurai were meaningful for me. The plot is very interesting. Amazingly written.
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