This Story is good👏👏 👏 👏👏....... Definitely, but the update is tooooo slow😭😭😭😭 😭 ........................... Author plsssss🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏 🙏 🙏................... Update MORE and FASTER🥺🥺🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺
HELLO YIN_YANG_MASTER AND I HOPE YOU ALWAYS HEALTHY.
I love to give 5 stars for your novel because.
The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me.
I love reading it very much when I'm free.
Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good.
I wish I could read it every day to fill my day.
I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead.
I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work.
Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel.
Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel.
I hope can read more and more a chapter every day.
I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy.
Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
Bro don't drop it please, at least write 60+ chapters............ V. V. V. V. V.. V. V.. V. V.. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V.. V. V. V. V. V. V.. V. V. VP. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. V. VP.. V. V. V. V... V. VP. VP. V.
Good story and grammar and plot....
Suggestion; OP MC..like level 60 by the time he is 11.., strong and smart..no retarded MC, no training others or some team ****-lone MC..one man army style [its cooler and plus its boring if MC requires others help]...romance and fluff [why not?]..keep it happy and fluff..no angsty tragic ****....add some bash [why not? we need someone to hate]
Upvote the review so that everyone will be able to read it.
It is still a bit rough. But I don’t have much time to make big changes to the story line since I have college for mast of the week so expect updates on weekends.
I would like any corrections you can give me in either chapter or paragraph comments.
Thanks for reading.
EternalWind