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Ignazio_Ragonesi
Niente male all'inizio ero diffidente ma poi a incominciato a piacermi sempre piรน leggevo piรน mi piaceva peccato non aver rivelato alla fine il main character scriveva libri
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HermitOfLifeMount
very nice ๐ def recommended tho be ready for some 100 spelling mistakes every chapter
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DaoistaYohan
Nรฃo perca seu tempo, o MC se chama "Yami" e รฉ quase tรฃo insolarado quanto o Naruto, e adivinhe? Ele nรฃo mata! Kkkk um Ninja que nรฃo mata, ridรญculo! Ele faz um acordo com o Naruto de ser a "Sombra" do Hokage, assim como o Hiruzen e o Danzou, mas o MC nรฃo chega nem aos pรฉs do Danzou, de Sombra o MC nรฃo tem nada! Entรฃo nรฃo perca seu tempo!
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lotus_lotus_4675
Everything about this was perfect other than the repetitive things, like bite me, or how the world didnโt make sense by adding Pokรฉmon into the mix. I mean it was a fun idea but I kinda wanted it to be just Naruto.
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DaoistBlackV
I read in FF.Net, but still ... Its's good reading, but need more dephthin characters, like he preaches about peace, relationships and stuff, but even knowing that Naruto and Sasuke could become strong to help him, still treat them as kids. The other Jounin, like Gai and Kakashi are strong, but never use neither of them too. its's more about a solitary Op character that try to look more than he is.6/10 overall
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Burningnova13
keep deleting this, it just makes me come back stronger. bad ending, everything was fake.
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DaoistRGOoG6
Super disappointed in the ending, everything being fake and not explained. Not letting him say goodbye.
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AOS
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COFFIN_COFFIN
I thought 28 Chapters is too little to read for a novel.This novel is like more than 100 chapters compressed to make a great story.The story is great,power scaling is good ,the fights aren't bad,character development and convo are good too.Overall a really good novel solid 4.5 i recommend you to give it a try you won't regret it.
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KingAniubus
Great job well worth a read .The main character was good I had a love hate relationship with the MC. Overall great story
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Burningnova13
everything was fake, what can i say? meaningless journeys are such a killer, you really went the matrix route did ya?
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iker44
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Good plot, excellent story.
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Swords_Night
great fanfic only if you are patient it can be calculated as the chapters are too big for normal fanfics
In general, fanfic top I advise everyone to read it
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dmaksmfSMF
one of the best Naruto fanfics IMO. Though there are some few issues. The author sometimes forgets things which the mc has, like extra stats he should've got, or dungeons time stopping. There also few issues in writing quality, but overall it's pretty good.
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Ichiya_Vandalay
Good story. MC isn't op and ruthless in the beginning, which was a breath of fresh air considering all the op MC kills everyone fanfics I read. The ending was bad; it felt rushed and forced. I was hoping for the MC to start his own clan. It was hinted by Hiruzen that he has the potential to start his own clan. And what was weird was that he forgot his custom teammates. Like what happened to China and Zaku and Ko after the chunin exam. They were never mentioned. It was like they never existed. The author didn't talk about them or at least hint at what happened to them. It is a solid book with long chapters, which makes it better. So 4.4 overall. If you like fanfics where the MC has real character development, then this is a must readย
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Rizki_Caturianto
A really really great story.. I love it so much!!!
Yeah it's a system story, plus MC become like Naruto brother (it's cliche, many story like that).. But Yami doesn't fear to make change to the future.. Plus it's really have so long words in 1 chap.. Love ittt!!! ๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Sharp_1
Everything is good, the writing quality, stability of updates, story development, character design, and world background. But the ending isn't that good imo.
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Jack_Uzumaki_9421
Es la nejor historia del munfo de naruto me emociono cada capitulo lo voy a volver a leer una y otra vez hasta que me lo aprenda de memoria asi estube todo el tiempo
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Niurem
This is why people dont use webnovel? Doesn't give a duck about people outaide the site, im sure mods actually see this stuff and dont remove it because its better for their app.
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Svato_Sijan
it's a great read. Loved it. no Harem, good language skills, ending was a little bit off putting butman this is a good book. Give it a try .
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Donovan_Jeppesen
The occasional sentence where you have to stop and think what was supposed to be, but other than those this is perfectly readable.
MC Yami has clear motivations and how he thinks even if he occasionally goes stupid. I would say he was well written.
The world building heavily piggybacks on the Naruto world as you would expect from a fanfic. However, the new element that are added are poorly explored and unsatisfactory.
Dungeons, only goes to one. I assume there is one in all 5 villages since he could start in any of them. Only visits the one in Konoha. Probably had the opportunity to visit the mist one when they where there.
Gains the ability to travel to other worlds. Never uses it.
Ending, reveled that everything was just a game. Walks out of vr arcade with irl gf and the arcade disappears and gf doesnโt remember it. Is stated that there are a lot of vr arcades so donโt really know why this one is that special besidesโฆ. It is hinted at him still having his rennegan, but it ends right after and doesnโt seem like this will continue.
It is a decent fanfic where MC makes some major changes to the story and it explains how it effects sasuke but everyone else besides those he kills or saves change. Many of the unique elements are under explored and a โit was just a dream endingโ
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sjfneohf
Another one of the first fanfics i read and I like this one more than legacy which says something if you look at how recommended legacy is lol
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Flying_Camel_
at the moments Iโve just started reading chapter 8 while writing this review and man I absolutely love this fan fic. The chapters are long donโt worry thereโs a lot to read. The writing is really good and overall I definitely recommend giving this a go
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FOX_64
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humangreed000
Its amazing the onky bad thing Is that he made haku a girl this might be my favourite ff 10/10 definitely recomend it and he chose all the routes i would apart from something i would accept both quests for danzo give him the body quest completed then kill him
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