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Lover's Lifeline system I have read all the chapters.
Lover's Lifeline System When is it coming back?
Lover's Lifeline System
Lover's Lifeline System
Lover's Lifeline System
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Yeah, I know you built like that
Gun it like a holster baby
Show dem say you wicked like that
We live where the war is raging
Chasing our crazy dreams
Hoping that the bridge won't cave in
Tonight we let it all go free
Gimme the ting and make me rock in a dance
Gimme the ting and make me rock in a dance
Mash it up, hot step in a dance
Gimme the ting and make me rock, rock, rock, rock
Gimme the ting and make me rock in a dance
Gimme the ting and make me rock in a dance
Mash it up, hot step in a dance
Gimme the ting and make me
Light it up
Light it up
Light it up
(Light it up, light it up)
Show them you're flames to the fire
It's written like your name on a flyer
They wanna tame your desire
But you light it up now your aims getting
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Biplav_Subedi
Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all
Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all
Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all
Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all
Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all
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Lover's Lifeline system I have read all the chapters.
Lover's Lifeline System When is it coming back?
Lover's Lifeline System
Lover's Lifeline System
Lover's Lifeline System
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I want to know when is it going to release.
I don't know how many years has it been...…………………………...……………..
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Biplav_Subedi
All are 5 star except one. I have been waiting for many sultry chapters to come. How many excuse is mc is going to make for some thing he enjoys but is in self denying phase. I hope he fucks his girlfriend mother in front of
her father. I am waiting for many shameless and perverted chapters to come.
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csd1
Really great story, I'm really enjoying it so far. The only problem I'm having so far is with the mc. It is really frustrating with how dumb and oblivious he is to things. Also his nice guy act is confusing and annoying/unsatisfying. I mean he let's a nurse do a bj when he already knows it already not a dream yet claims he doesn't like cheating. Also says he wants a normal life, but describes his sister as wearing a sexy apron. So pretty much please make the mc more intelligent, cunning, and more darker. Not saying to make him kill and torture random people, but at least take full advantage of his system like any person would and mercilessly get rid of whoever is hostile towards him. If the mc were to gain those three things this novel would be extremely enjoyable to read. Definitely a 5 star.
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Rikudou
Great Story! Great Story! Great Story! Great Story! Great Story! Great Story! Great Story! Great Story! Great Story! Great Story! Needs a bit of working on your grammar. Overall the story is Superb.
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Harem_fan
This is your typical Truck-kun=Resurrect on a timer=Sexy-time system. What makes it different from others is 2 points at least in this early two chapters....1 The helper/system fairy seems to have a chaotic relationship with the mc, you cant tell if she wants to help or screw the young man. 2 The mc seems to want to be a one women beta man but the system seems to want women, baby's, and chaos! Also to make him assertive to desires. All in all if it keeps going as is it should be enjoyable to follow along this story.
SilverSakura