istg authors with commitment issues should not wrote, nothing I hate more when stories never finish. I used to read alot now I don't because I expect the worst,
A deceptive title, why lie and deceive?!?? Where are the ethics, honesty and credibility?!? But this is the reality of the situation, it is unfortunate, goodness, honesty and morals are only found in the novels, the reality is only lying and deception for the sake of a few coins
Pardon me, english isnt my main language. The story is quite good. I enjoy it so far. I noticed plenty mistakes with the grammar. Btw, Stop complaining about why the mc isnt a villain. Just enjoy the story, its free. The author doenst charge you.
it's just not it why is all the females following him and hes so emo like why he is drawing too much attention he said I will become a villain right the way is he a retard he doesn't think a out his actions he just completely ignorant why did he display his powers like that and the saving ppl it's just disgusting hes a complete retard
follow a guy who claims he will be the villain. When you read the villain Mc tag you are sure that the mc will be a villain then you get to see a hero mc with a bad personality. You wait and wait thinking it will get better because there was a villain tag the mc might turn into a mc villain but no what awaits you is pure dissappointment
The mc is a hero not a villain, so if any of of u want to read a villain story, don't read it, it's just a waste of time
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I Understand this novel is about the path towards brcoming a villain but once an actual person makes up their mind and reincarnates, why would they think about their past actions in their previous life? Also
I am proud of the MC, being wary and all of his surroundings and being stonecold outside because of his tragic life... I somewhat know what did he feel when everybody lied and betrayed him in his old world. btw I really wish for the author to update this more often ahaha, because it's like more exciting what would happen next.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
idk why ppl be complaining its pretty good
all of guys just suck go back reading shounen novels that the author work hard to update new chaps support him if u dont want to read then dont read it and dont complain
one of the best isekai novels i have read
at least kaido have determination to be a villain he will even kill innocent if that what it takes to achieve his goal
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People need to learn how to read the description. It didn't say whether or not that he was goings to be a villain. And just because the title says something about villains people automatically think that's what going to happen. It's truly annoying especially when reading stories that are similar to this in that way
Well its kind of ok . But not actually the best and the misleading title. More like anti hero than villain . The story is slightly fast paced which is good.
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Most misleading title and synopsis ever!!!! Fawk author!! MC is not a villain, not a it hero!! MC is just a sissy hypocrite hero. Wasted my time reading this crap thinking that it will change to MC Villain but nope. Just a bitc* MC and author lame story.
Hi it's me, your narrator. It would be a solid book if you actually read your draft twice.
Before I criticise you, I want to say that the book would be good if you had a editor.
First, there are no periods. Second, some words are not fully formed, and some sentences don't have commas where their are supposed to be. Third, it literally says, chapter one of chapter one.
I literally can't read it without cringing.
Bro he’s not a villain at all lol he’s even nicer and than me. He seems to be just a hero with an dick personality lmao. Writing villain novels is not for u pal stick to basic isekai stories you would great at that u🤡
I'm putting this here since not much people give a damn about first chapter comments.
To all of you that criticize this novel. I have a question. Did you truly read it? Or were you smacked down to first impressions? Must all first impressions be really good?
Listen here. From all the reviews that I get on this novel most of them says how ****ty this is. Don't get me wrong, I'm not here to defend the novel. I'm here to educate you.
You judge by the first chapter. You judge by the sypnosis. Then you throw in your 'opinion'. What did you expect? A dude that makes chaos and the like right at the bat? A dude that doesn't give a crap and just kills anyone? My god. Read the ******* title properly cause if you don't ******* get it. Then go back to gradeschool English.
Pls take note. If you expected an actual 'villain' to be thrown at another world and then make chaos then get the hell out of here. I don't need people to read this when they think that the title is A villain transported to another world. Take note you r*****s. The title is. I'll "become" a villain in another world. "Become", as in, a path process. Not a straight up wannabe story but a path process story.
Oh, and by all of those low star ratings, if your looking for the typical type of villain. Then this novel isn't for you. I don't need people throwing criticizing reviews when they can't even support a path process novel.
Title is promising and story under delivers, he’s not a hero or a villain. MC is just a pissy cunt that doesn’t go the marvel route and not kill...would give 0 stars on character design and story development if I could. Change the title to: typical isekai with a whining MC
The MC is to much of a hero for me. First he was supposed to be a villain then he was a anti hero and now he's just a plain hero! This is a total waste of time and I don't recommend!
The plot is very interesting and the World Background is very good. Stability of updates is equally good. Character Design is good in respect of the 3-4 characters I have come across up to the 5th chapter.
A few more dialogues in each chapter is what people had advised me and I am passing on the same here as well as shorter paragraphs.
Writing quality is good a few typos and mixing of tenses which do not disturb the flow of the story.
All the best.
Great story with good writing style,more than mine I guess but the way the MC laugh creep me out. In my humble opinion villain don't need to laugh like they are madman but like a badass. Keep up
Nice story
It could have been more interesting if he had stayed in his original world.
Also try to mellow down his attitude he seems less of a badass and more of a **** pissed at the world which he probably nis anyways but try to make him a cold and calculating personality that treats the rest of humankind as ants. That is an interesting villain persona.
Either way good story. Has potential.
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