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so many plot holes... i'm not sure why this novel is rated so highly
The premise is good but the execution is sloppy
The MC knows everything he needs to know without any learning, he literally will decide to learn some technique he pulled out of nowhere and just roll with it, no questions asked. Also, nothing is really explained plotwise... he doesn't really have a purpose other than mild curiosity, but i cant even say that for sure since the MC has the personality of a cardboard box. He literally feels nothing and is never really surprised by anything or has strong feelings for anyone else.
To Be Honest this is the best original book I have ever read. I love the dual interactions between the MC when he is white Star and When he isnβt *coughs* Tina *coughs*
This is a good novel. Sometimes there are a bit cliche. Sometimes there are act without good reason.
But the story is interesting. There are a big mystery there that keep you wondering what it is.
The writing quality are good,there are some typo or grammatical error but overall its good and readable.
Updating stability are also good,there are some delay about a few days but then author give mass realease
Story development and world background are good. The story keep reader wanting to know more and with good world background
Character design is also good, all people have their own character, which make the story interesting because they dont behave like puppet.
At first it seemed to be an interesting story but unfortunately the execution is very poor.
Unexplained, impossible lucky coincidences. The MC turning to a tycoon suddenly that even the world most powerful organisations are jealous of him after a single quest. MC suddenly showing expertise in things he should not be knowledgeable about just so he could show off. MC's personality changing suddenly within a few chapters.
Well written and interesting story. I think itβs nice if the protagonist doesnβt have to deal with the worst humanity has to offer every time he meets new people. Sure he has absurd plot armor, but it doesnβt influence the story in a bad way imo.
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Very nice novel. I didnt except this novel to be this good. The story is like flowing water. Smoth sailing. Just one, the jurney of the MC is like too smoth. Maybe you can try "blessing in disguise" arc.
Thank you for novel. I'm enjoying it very much.
Love the story because it has great character development for the mc and a great story witch is rare considering that most original storyβs on this app are ****
This is a great story. Premise is fun, characters are well fleshed out and the story arc is becoming intriguing. Hope the author continues this story and completes it
This book is just amazing. I can't wait for more. This has some amazing ideas and I'm pretty sure more interesting things will happen. I can't wait to read more chapters and keep up the good work
A very good story for a quick read, if you are detail oriented like me you might be bothered by some things like: Scale of power poorly explained, everything working conveniently for the MC.
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This one is amazing, the update rate is good and the background of the story is really interesting. I feel like this story can go a long way. I hope this story never ends.
This is hands down one of my favorite novels ever I really hope the author does not stop making this cuz it's just so damn good overall the only thing I have a problem with is the character development need some work
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One of the BEST Novel I read till now and I have read too many to count lol. Every novel reader should read it! Future tech + fantasy + dungeon like world + plot + terrifying plot armour
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This is great. I honestly wasn't expecting much considering there was no summary for the story. Experience has taught me if the author doesn't care enough to even make a simple summary than the story is probably garbage. I was bored so I thought I would read a chapter and got hooked. Anyone wondering if they should take a chance should definitely take it. It has an evolution system so if you are a fan of humans evolving into something greater than this is a story for you. The story is based on a seemingly normal earth that is a convergence for other dimensions which include fantasy and mythology. The mc is a normal human who through bad luck gets introduced to the hidden society.
I don't want to say anything else because I don't want to ruin the story.
The story is great, the release rate is amazing, the back exceptional this the story to read if u enjoyed anything similar to solo leveling, a would fight any one who says solo leveling is better ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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