Reviews of A Living Armour owns a Tavern by tinapaykid - Webnovel

this is probably the best thing I will read in my entire life please keep writing its so good

I found the novel interesting, to be honest everything was going very well until chapter 43 after that things got a little confusing with the system, the characters are great but after that point it started to add a lot of things, I think it could be better done , the idea is interesting but I thought that things escalated very quickly besides the character doesn't have a tavern so I think it could be better, but in general I found the story with great potential, it was a lot of work in the cooking but I think in a At a certain point it was different in my opinion from what it was supposed to be.

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Cant wait for more [img=recommend][img=update][img=update] It has a nice plot line. Not too fast and not too slow story progression.. Like it..

I'm just rating this because I like it... so just scroll away if you pressed this .... . . . . . .if your'e still reading it's an interesting idea and has good execution.

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A very good novel that you cant help but love. It doesn't get enough recognition for how good it is. While some parts dont seem to make sense to everyone they will if you read the paragraph and chapter comments.

Has good potential for hungry readers. only problem for me is that there isn't enough chapters coming out. But hey! I'm just a fast reader who likes details

I must say this is probably one of the best cookings I had read. Plus the story is nice as well. Fantastic

A great story its a must read on this website please read it. Its reallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly good/

A very good novel that is quite unique and fun it has quite a lot of depth and it most certainly has flavor good character build lots of world lore very well done author

The story is good with a lot of details and a few minor grammatical mistakes that most people won't notice or simply care about. The characters that are supposed to be likeable have you emotionally invested in them and the characters that are supposed to be unlikeable have you hating their guts and wait for them to die a slow and painful death. World background isn't mentioned much, only the parts that you will need to know immediately or after a few chapters. The cooking part is better than other novels where 1 guy runs the whole restaurant and finishes cooking in seconds. The author actually researches what he is writing about. Read chapters 36

So, really liking how the story is developing so far. Your novel follows the advice from the Book of Authors to the T. I myself could not help putting info dump in the first chapter for my novel, but you did a great job on that aspect! I guess we will get to explore the world with Gus. And that is something I really like. I am assuming English is not your first language, you could definitely better the grammar a bit. It will make it easier for everyone to read, especially keeping the tenses consistent. I can also see that you are a cook, or at least interested in cooking since the cooking descriptions are really detailed. I think I will continue reading! Keep up the great work!

This story is really interesting, all things considering. I appreciate the detail that you put in with the cooking. I only wish you would put more detail in with the characters and the background, but that's just me nitpicking. I've only read 10 chapters so far, but I'll continue reading it, so keep up the good work! Also, there are some grammatical and spelling mistakes, but nothing too outrageous.

Don't read this when you're hungry, just the description of the first paragraph on chapter one made me want to try some, It's very interesting and the layout of the chapters and system is nice and easy on the eyes. The only thing is there are a few spelling mistakes, Gus is written as guy by accident a lot of times through the story. Other then that I recommend you read it :)

For those perverts out there it has a side character of stupid "loli" For those who actually prefer a novel not using a trope of stupid baggage that looks like a child this isn't it I assumed it would be a ok novel but mc is a walking suit of armor that will outlive anyone he gets close too And the first thing that happens is a "loli" is inside his new body which was just made by a god... so theres already a loophole there Also living suits of armor don't need sleep they arnt human so right away this novel made a useless loophole to add a loli trope in it I can say for a fact this isn't going to end well ... after a while a bunch of people will demand more lol is and a harem and a kingdom for the mc and the novel will be just another in a pile of wish fulfillment novels

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