Reviews of Unrivaled System by XxEagleNightxX - Webnovel

This is just bad. Who starts off a story w wanting to bang their sister. Author is weird

The story would be so much better if the author had actually checked it for grammatical errors and had it edited. Unfortunately the author did neither of those things. The writing quality is terrible. My 8 year old could do better.

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Eu sinceramente curtir muito esse romance,pena que nao tenha mais capitulos mas o romance e incrivel eu recomendo pra quem gosta de um protagonista até que legal.

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1 logical reaction to this novel! I can read this novel and its interesting but the character development is as trashy as it can be.We need more interaction not some girls that lose ther v card on the 1 day and say they love him. And all the cringey stuff! At first i thought the MC is going to be cool and edgy,but the guy thinks with is D only.He is even worse than Yun Che. At least Yun Che had some game but still trash. All in all im reading this novel mainly bcs i ve seen Scathath as one of the girls in his harem.The MC here is too cringey and forcefull there is 0 romance and 0 logic.The girls just take it like they are some dolls that cant think or act. The MC is lustfull child with a god complex.The end

I wouldn't recommend this novel really. Lot's of language errors but the main reason is the quality of the story as a whole. It really just seems as if everything has so very little thought put into it. I'd say the characters are 2 dimensional but that would be an insult to 2D. The r-18 scenes are mediocre at best. Author has a REAL bad habit of basically copy pasting scenes pretty much.

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This could've been so much better... After reading all the available chapters all I can say about this is cringe, immature, unreasonable. That's it.

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bro just didn't give up because i love your job,.........I hope you finish your work here because it is great, saying how my mother used to say if it started, finish even if you become the enemy of the world

if i dont like a novel, i usually dont rate it but fortunately i like it, so i'll give it 5 stars xD Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant

This thing is just a porno....MC thinks only of his dick....he just fucks someone and that someone falls in love with him.....this novel is just porno no story at all....

You can tell the improvement with each chapter, little by little when compared to the very first chapters which is understandable to me. Very nice plot and scenes, looking forward to more.

bro I really like his work bro and a half what bothers me and is uncomfortable is kind of his environment I think because a lot of strong people and the MC is kind of good being the guy is in crisis when the war of demons and gods arrives And a lot of strong people around him kind of take away the fun, but so far his romance is very good bro

Om Namah Shivāya The universe bows to Lord Shiva. I bow to Lord Shiva. Rāmarājyavāsī tvam, procchrayasva te śiram Nyāyārthaṁ yudhyasva, sarveṣu samaṁ cara Paripālaya durbalam, viddhi dharmaṁ varam Procchrayasva te śiram, Rāmarājyavāsī tvam. You live in Ram’s kingdom, hold your head high. Fight for justice. Treat all as equal. Protect the weak. Know that dharma is above all. Hold your head high, You live in the kingdom of Ram.

it's a great read I loved the plot(i am more of smut guy) and story is good to it's just just just just why not updating pls author-san don't drop this master piece..

Overall great, just don’t know why there hasn’t been any updates so far. I wish that you would post more chapters. The character developement are great!

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I'll be frank about this. This story seems to be plot driven story with a women driven protagonist sprinkle of *** scenes so far (so if you came for (R-18) scenes then you should hunker down because it will take a while)) The women in the novel are incredibly easy to capture (the novel even explicitly mentions it) and so far the women currently involved with the protagonist are easily differentiable from each other. The protagonist himself is weird in my opinion. Sometimes I feel as if the author is being wish-washy with his character or is trying to develop it. The plot feels like it had many things added to make it more interesting but all those things did not mix together well enough (its like cooking, it feels like the author did not let his soup simmer enough between each addition of his ingredients). This story is relatively poor in quality but still fulfills its purpose.

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