I literally made an account just to review this, this story, just from two chapters, got me hooked, and it's apparently the author's first work, which I am calling bull****, this is AMAZING, I can't believe that it's someone's first work
I Have to admit.
this 2 chapters are the greatest 2 chapters i've ever read. im not really fun of judging story until i read couple of hundred chapters. as i always have the non-care reading.
but this is the first time and only 2 chapters. i had an " this is interesting " while reading.
and believe me. it really is. hopefuly it keeps interesting.
Quality writing so far, but I can’t be immersed because the setup doesn’t pass the smell test. What is the point of the Xis doing what they’re doing? As far as the cover story goes, it’s not plausible, so I assume they have an ulterior motive ... but the implausibility of the cover story still makes this hard to swallow.