Chapter comments on the chapter of the book Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons

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Luuwt
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Luuwt

Well well I'll take first for this chap so that once this novel blows up my name shall be written in history
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Anas_Bahi
I literally made an account just to review this, this story, just from two chapters, got me hooked, and it's apparently the author's first work, which I am calling bull****, this is AMAZING, I can't believe that it's someone's first work
9mth
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Eternal_Pathfinder
An artificial sun? These Xi being stingy, they could use a stellar engine to move an entire star over, but nah, they just turn on some flashlights.
5mth
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ImaRandomGuy
Anyways, you're a wiking now. Lmao
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Dragoniax
I Have to admit. this 2 chapters are the greatest 2 chapters i've ever read. im not really fun of judging story until i read couple of hundred chapters. as i always have the non-care reading. but this is the first time and only 2 chapters. i had an " this is interesting " while reading. and believe me. it really is. hopefuly it keeps interesting.
5mth
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Dennis_Wallin
Sköldmör och valkyria
7mth
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imperfectlyperfect
Good story line and build. This will be a great novel
7mth
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Milarch_315
norse mythology.
1mth
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BingeReader01
The sentencing is somewhat awkward.
5mth
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LaoTze
Quality writing so far, but I can’t be immersed because the setup doesn’t pass the smell test. What is the point of the Xis doing what they’re doing? As far as the cover story goes, it’s not plausible, so I assume they have an ulterior motive ... but the implausibility of the cover story still makes this hard to swallow.
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