Chapter comments on the chapter of the book Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons

The author did not build enough emotional real estate with his family to justify this grand revenge plan. We know he lived with them for ten years, so what? As a reader, I'm not invested.

He seems like the biggest cuck and a simp lmao. Jesus its been a while since ive read about someone so weak willed and misguided

Thanks for the chapter. So okay to make a revenge goal. But really? Destroy a whole clan? One that is supported by a god even if said god is a "evil" one.

This chapter did not have the impact i think it should have. There's no real emotional investment in any of the characters so far, and the MC isn't relatable. I don't know if it's the English or the time spent on character building that is lacking.

Bad bad chapter and writing

wheres thw sytem

If you do not like how plot is progressing shut the **** up..always wanna complain about something

Good

Xp

Thx

Thanks for the chapter!

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