Chapter comments on the chapter XVII. The Declaration of the book Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons

my god .... why do all authors have to make MC so weak in relation to women? .... he told the biggest secret that "MOTHER AND SISTER" he loves so much just to not lose a girl. .. honestly it was veryoo disappointing

What a friggin SIMP MAHGOD, HE LITERALLY RATTED OUT HIS ENTIRE FAMILY AND THEIR SECRET JUST FOR SOME HOE LOL

I feel MC is very weak in character. His firmness is too low. Such poor character will never lead to greatness. He has to experience trauma and extreme pain so that he wakes up from this stubborn illusion of reality.

I am so happy he is leaving her this is the most jarring and poorly planned romance I have ever seen man come on what the hell is happening I Knew the time skip was gonna be a problem now i was right this **** came out of no where now they love each other and are fucking in the bushes NANI????

The sex was unnecessary. But it add drama to the story I guess. But the time skip didn't portrait their deed love properly. So a bit lack of that long repressed love that author tries to express.

Its called character development u mother ****erz just wait for it, if their isn't any i might die but I'm waiting

so disappointing.

this has been one of the worst written chapters I've ever read, this was so fucking bad I had to close the app for two hours before opening it back up again

You people are way too harsh... Aiyyee the Lies of Loki clan already know who he is by now.. Think about.. Plus she seems to be the future wife of the MC so he should trust her...

Thanks for the chapter!

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Thx for the chapter 😻

so fast man

My God i'm wheezing lmao🤣🤣🤣

Once again, the sentencing is so awkward, find an editor immediatly, you so need it. I feel like I am reading a primary school students novel.

Well to me I don't see MC's emotions as a weakness.. it's the very thing that makes him human and pretty much give him strength to make it

I am so happy she and this dumb romance ain’t gonna be in the next arc plz author don’t skip over everything and give ur story time to breath cuz it feel like ur skipping over all the good character and story development moment that can give it weight in order to make the mc strong as soon as possible so he can fight ppl

Good

Okay, guys chill out. He 18 yrs old what more can you expect from him?

The setting is cool, the plot could be better, but the language man. Is it even English? Honestly my brain hurts when trying to read.