Mc’ ambition about killing loki’s adepts is too fake and without real basis. At least thats how ı see. Out of nowhere he decided to extrtminate entaire clann and he isnt even amazing warior. Where this confidance come from. His legs was shaking in front of single noob now he is aiming impossible and declare his intention to any tom and jerry he sees. And no one find it ridiculous. Come on man. İf you see some ordinary highschool graduate who claims he will invent teleportation you would only think that “where did this crazy idiot come from.”
Brain was the master of Dag master, do it's understandable that he came to the village of Dag and his family, as if it was a ritual for him.
Yet Dag didn't even get a clue that something was weird.... why would his father disciple come to his village....
Here what I came up with. Don't know if it's true but maybe.
1. They are still on earth.
2. The sun never died
3. The "different planets" are just different part of earth where they send the people.
4. Maybe the Xi are just a group of human responsible for this so called dark period or something. Maybe it's just a game for them and they are watching from somewhere. They could have used technology to create these magic powers.
Not sure but this story gives me a strange feeling, as if something is off / missing.
Master: only old grandma's are best, especially ones in diapers
MC: oh how wise great master, you are so right, I'll accept that as Gospel.
Lmao. MC just regurgitates everything other people tell him, not an original thought in that little head of his. His mother wants revenge, so he wants revenge, his master likes walking, so he likes walking, his sister wants to be a strong warrior, so he wants to be a strong warrior.
Author, am finding your MC too stupid, weak and coward with a loose mouth. The story started very good but at this point my interest is going down. But I am still hoping that in further chapter the MC become brave and interesting. As it is your first novel, we let go many thing. I hope you get better and better with your novel.
A crybaby mc in a land of warriors who gets scared easily and isn’t even best of his town dreams of killing one of the gods and all of his minions. I wonder how thick the plot armor is for this mc to achieve his goals