Chapter comments on the chapter of the book Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons

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Samael61
Mc’ ambition about killing loki’s adepts is too fake and without real basis. At least thats how ı see. Out of nowhere he decided to extrtminate entaire clann and he isnt even amazing warior. Where this confidance come from. His legs was shaking in front of single noob now he is aiming impossible and declare his intention to any tom and jerry he sees. And no one find it ridiculous. Come on man. İf you see some ordinary highschool graduate who claims he will invent teleportation you would only think that “where did this crazy idiot come from.”
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TheGlorius
What an open-mouthed MC huh ... come out telling everyone the secrets now?
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OpepopFR
Brain was the master of Dag master, do it's understandable that he came to the village of Dag and his family, as if it was a ritual for him. Yet Dag didn't even get a clue that something was weird.... why would his father disciple come to his village....
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EtherealStar
Here what I came up with. Don't know if it's true but maybe. 1. They are still on earth. 2. The sun never died 3. The "different planets" are just different part of earth where they send the people. 4. Maybe the Xi are just a group of human responsible for this so called dark period or something. Maybe it's just a game for them and they are watching from somewhere. They could have used technology to create these magic powers. Not sure but this story gives me a strange feeling, as if something is off / missing.
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LongSongGolden
Master: only old grandma's are best, especially ones in diapers MC: oh how wise great master, you are so right, I'll accept that as Gospel. Lmao. MC just regurgitates everything other people tell him, not an original thought in that little head of his. His mother wants revenge, so he wants revenge, his master likes walking, so he likes walking, his sister wants to be a strong warrior, so he wants to be a strong warrior.
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Boomer_Boy
God this **** fuckin suck ass... The concept is amazing, but holy **** the author is terrible.
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mrghost_spectre
I hope Dag matured as a person and a character.
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ShiLOh
no character growth still.
8mth
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Jr_Wyatt
is the 2 percent making him say hes gonna kill everyone because his change in mood was so weird and out of place
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min24
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min24

Author, am finding your MC too stupid, weak and coward with a loose mouth. The story started very good but at this point my interest is going down. But I am still hoping that in further chapter the MC become brave and interesting. As it is your first novel, we let go many thing. I hope you get better and better with your novel.
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Prashanna979
A crybaby mc in a land of warriors who gets scared easily and isn’t even best of his town dreams of killing one of the gods and all of his minions. I wonder how thick the plot armor is for this mc to achieve his goals
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Mr_Grumpy
See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop
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Bugg
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Bugg

Wouldn't be surprised if that whole set up was a recruitment ground for some space marine chapter.
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Yatendouij
he cried when his nose was broken and he wants to kill an entire clan wow until he kills the Loki clan, he will have broken many body parts
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insanitycrimson
Why would the mc not know about magic .........how the hell did they educate him on earth
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Bob_the_zombie
Dag is an absolute simp
8mth
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ShiLOh
yeah.. ungrateful MC.
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