Chapter comments on the chapter XXXIX. The Pendant of the book Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons

Wow! Worst chapter so far! Dude are you 8 years old or something? Wtf! People don't talk like that and the mc is almost retarded really? He can sense things better than most but can't hear 3 men or their horses? So much inconsistencies in your writing and mc is such a joke. How can anyone invest any emotion on the mc?

He is such a busybody from the start

If it was me i'd have just left her but plot beckons

Thx

thx for the chapter 😻

Good

good story...