Chapter comments on the chapter of the book Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons

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skyIsBlue
He is such a busybody from the start
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Luuwt
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Luuwt

If it was me i'd have just left her but plot beckons
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Johnknight1
Wow! Worst chapter so far! Dude are you 8 years old or something? Wtf! People don't talk like that and the mc is almost retarded really? He can sense things better than most but can't hear 3 men or their horses? So much inconsistencies in your writing and mc is such a joke. How can anyone invest any emotion on the mc?
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