Yep, your act as conssequence like boy ... but of course plot-armor will come save the day, and save the girl and you will seem be a hero and all.
I despise the "luke save the day" all time in this kind of story, where the MC never learn of his mistake because fortune save is *ss all the time for fix the follout of is stupidity.
Sadly, it's almsot alway like that. Love a day when i will see some realistic and gruesome end, who will force the MC to learn, grown, and us is brain in a story. Even if it's realy sad for the poor her/him who will suffer because of that, of course.
I just have to come out and say it
Author what are u thinking you've easily made the most annoying mc to read. Did he not grow up through the ten years of training. Also your throwing so much random **** at him. Its a mess hes been attacked 3 times in 2 days in a remote location close the clan and people can easily just waltz in!?!? It actually hurts my brain
You just have to understand dag character and personality. I think so far it is consistent to his time in jerhast. With asa, gribb and erik and stein. A little naive and a little mountain tortoise. A little stupid too. Just read on. This mc is not a smart mc like the others transmigration novels.
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