Chapter comments on the chapter of the book Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons

this sh*t is getting annoying

Dude needs to suffer, so he can start thinking before opening his mouth and talking nonsense

Mc is always Pitiful and blindly heroic and speaks without thinking

It is so hard to imagine him being 18 that time skip really hurt the story as I can see him being like this if he was younger and didn’t spend so much time here. Slow character growth is fine but I have seen that done well which is rare and having a mc who acts the same as he was when he was 8 after ten years is a problem especially considering his environment he was raised in. I also dislike slow character growth usually as authors like to go with as dumb of an mc as possible with the goal to acting like a rational ***** while they are already grown up. I like it better if the mc starts normal struggles with killing, how to handle situations ect but I am sticking through to see if he does change within a reasonable time frame(though ten years of hardly changing besides his skills seems ridiculous).

I agree Dag talks without thinking...

lots of negative comments here..and i agree..the EQ level of the MC or even the story is a mess..you need to be more transparent on how you portray the characters thought process since you are currently doing a poor job of convincing your readers. instead of enjoying the story, i am getting fed up with the MCs behavior mainly.

heh, weak. does he not know what reality is.....this is getting lame.

Exp

I still bet on giving MC time to grow. He will get better

Thx