Chapter comments on the chapter of the book Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons

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defensiveIQ
this sh*t is getting annoying
7mth
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MARDGEER
Dude needs to suffer, so he can start thinking before opening his mouth and talking nonsense
8mth
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KeyLessHeart
Mc is always Pitiful and blindly heroic and speaks without thinking
8mth
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LegolasGreenleaf
It is so hard to imagine him being 18 that time skip really hurt the story as I can see him being like this if he was younger and didn’t spend so much time here. Slow character growth is fine but I have seen that done well which is rare and having a mc who acts the same as he was when he was 8 after ten years is a problem especially considering his environment he was raised in. I also dislike slow character growth usually as authors like to go with as dumb of an mc as possible with the goal to acting like a rational ***** while they are already grown up. I like it better if the mc starts normal struggles with killing, how to handle situations ect but I am sticking through to see if he does change within a reasonable time frame(though ten years of hardly changing besides his skills seems ridiculous).
1mth
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Dike_Nwankwo_Jnr
I agree Dag talks without thinking...
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Palabasa
lots of negative comments here..and i agree..the EQ level of the MC or even the story is a mess..you need to be more transparent on how you portray the characters thought process since you are currently doing a poor job of convincing your readers. instead of enjoying the story, i am getting fed up with the MCs behavior mainly.
1mth
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BlackMinus
heh, weak. does he not know what reality is.....this is getting lame.
1mth
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imperfectlyperfect
I still bet on giving MC time to grow. He will get better
7mth
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