Reviews of Reincarnation in One Piece: The Adventure of Ian Louis! [COMPLETE!] by CrazyGuest - Webnovel

Above average and entertaining, but not what you may expect and not for me. I have tried picking up this novel twice and have become disinterested twice (read until zou). It is well written for a fanfic without glaring grammer issues and the story takes a unique spin on the one peice world which is not easy given how many fanfics there are for it. However the author chose to wuxia the one peice world which always felt out of place to me. i.e. new power levels like emporer realm and saint realm are totally unnecessary in a world that has a very clearly defined power structure(especially when the author chooses to use both power structures to explain eachother when one is already enough). The other reason i became disinterested is the inconsistency of the mc’s power levels and the mc’s deus ex machina abilities. One chapter he is stronger than vice admirals but weaker than admirals and can barely hold his own. Then a few chapters later he is able to hold back 3 admirals, sengoku, and Garp without and power increase? The same with his abilities, which are just introduced when the author needs them, like healing, mind manipulation, increased gravity, etc, followed by a sentence how he learned that ability long ago but didnt use it because he didnt want to or was unable to yet. He recently told his crew about increasing his abilities through exotic DNA which they should not understand at all. DNA is known as the lineage factor in one peice and is something both new and not known to common people. It is the whole premise for the vinsmoke family arc, but his crew just casually understand this because they need to for the story. Overall, i enjoyed much of this story and many will not be bothered by what i mentioned. But for me the repetative deus ex machina moments for the mc have dulled any tension or interest i had.

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To quickly sum up this fanfic; grammar is decent and writing quality is above average, power levels in the fic are all over the place with authors new system for them, OP Mc who could yeet most enemies within first 30 chapters of the novel (slight exaggeration), story just feels abit monotone and doesn’t really whisk you away.

Well done I enjoyed reading this it has plenty of chapters to binge and it wasn’t very hard to understand what was written I believe the ending might have been a little rushed but I still enjoyed it nonetheless

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3 chapters in and we got an MC with mastery of Rokushiki, could use all 3 Haki and have Telekenisis and Regeneration base powers. Might as well make Imu as the MC at this point. A fic with zero challenge is pretty boring.

So glad i found this, simply one of the best

It was a nice twist to the storyline that kept me reading to the end. It's definitely a good pick to read

Salah satu fanfic one piece paling luar biasa yang pernah aku baca. Walaupun singkat tapi tidak begitu terburu-buru, kekuatan karakter utama juga tidak terlalu OP jadi masih bisa diterima. Ini hanya pendapat ku dan jika salah mohon maaf. One of the most incredible one-piece fanfic I've ever read. Even though it's short, it's not too rushed, and the strength of the main character isn't too OP, so it's still acceptable. It's just p.s

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I really loved the spin on the one piece story. but the ending was like it was setting up for a continuation or a spin off. you know like what worlds they go to next and the like.

Slightly above the average fanfic with grammar mistakes here and there. The "original" (author-created) characters are boring. There's no real development or meaning for them. I feel as if I could cut any one of them out and it would be the same story. Speaking of which, the story is very standard "Strong enemy requires the hero to gather allies to fight them." Dropped at Ch 198 Final comment: Doesn't evoke enough interest/feelings to make me continue reading

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Just finished and I gotta say This book was truly a great read. Adapted One Piece as good as anyone has and truly enjoyed the lore you created.

This book is amazing and I really liked how the author designs the MC and the flow of the story is pretty nice.. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Great fan fic, really well written. Good story progression. The beginning was a bit slow, but it got really great to read very fast. Would definitely recommend for anyone looking for a good fan fic

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The story is so good that I got hook to the point I forgot to sleep even though I have to wake up early in the morning😅😪. I think it is very good because... yeah for me it is so good so good so good!!! all important things?😅 should be repeated Hahaha😆😁😆

This is such a great book. Everything about this book is amazing. Who ever reads this review should read this book. Now to post this I am going to type and ramble on.