OMEGAVERSE<33 i really like how the story starts and the twists of it like alpha secretly an omega ?! honestly one of my favorite tropes in ABO hehe
i like the plot so far and each characters story's really realistic in most omegaverse common discrimination towards omega lmaoo really enjoy those specials scenes too @^@
My first ever review so forgive ๐!!! I give 5stars for everything on this ๐. The Synopsis doesn't do the story any justice, this book is much more than that. Author, you really blew my mind with this story. My excitement for this book is over the top!๐๐ ๐The style, structure and grammar were ๐. I've gone through a roller-coaster of every emotion๐ญ๐๐ก๐๐ฑ๐ค๐คฃ๐ข. .. out there with this one, and my interest never depleted. Can't wait to see what's next, hope to get the next chap soon. Thank you ๐๐ค.
Good, believable character development and storyline. The random misspelling of names and random words is a bit distracting to a smooth read, but it's manageable. Can't wait for more!
To be fair it is weird to read the whole thing about will and Jayden and then them not ending together so I hope we get more of them. But at the same time I want will to be happy and right now I doesnโt feel like he can be with Jayden. But I hope that Jayden doesnโt just get totally thrown out of the story.
But other then that the story is amazing and Iโve your writing.[img=recommend]
This book doesn't have the most consistent updates but the story is really good and worth the wait. The writing and grammar are above average and the characters have incredible depth. Yes it has many of the typical omegaverse troupes but the MC Will is one of my favorite ukes. If you like this genre it's a must read. *not for those uncomfortable with reading scenes involving sexual assault/domestic violence*
Amazing story!!! Worth your time....still anticipating more but so far it just great. Keep up the writing Author u deserve all the accolades you can get๐[img=recommend]
I absolutely love this book. Itโs got toxic relationship drama. What I really like about this book that we donโt see often is what happens if a fated relationship is toxic? We never see those types. Only downside - itโs not updated as often anymore and Iโm not sure we will see an ending. If you can imagine your own ending, definitely a fun read!
Alpha's are the dumbest people in every universe. This one is no exception. I wish the author would complete the story but honestly where it ends is pretty okay. It's very obvious what's going to happen and who's going to end up with who.
My favorite part of the story is how I kept changing which ML I was rooting for. I think that shows just how well written the characters are, you really get to see them grow and change in ways that feel totally natural.
I'm really liking this story. I like the fact that the MC is not really giving up and he's not surrending himself to his fated mate, since he didn't want to have one. The fact that he was able to raise two children alone, ignoring the social stigma, proves his willpower
A very good story. It's honestly very dramatic and it is full of twists and turns that you would never expect. You'll want to strap yourself in a for a roller coaster of emotions, because you're about to take the ride of a lifetime, reading this. The characters are all unique and fleshed out making each one stan out so you can easily distinguish who is who. The background of the world is amazingly defined by the author and makes you feel like you are in the story itself. The Writing style is well rounded and very easy and pleasing to read. Besides a few minor mix-ups that happen to the best of us, the story flows well from beginning to the current chapter as of this review. I wish the author much luck and happiness as they find their groove and inspiration to write more. I'll be waiting for more chapters to feast my eyes on whenever that happens to be. Overall this story is absolutely worth reading and getting lost in. You'll quickly find your ship and choose a team, but remember to keep an open mind and not judge the author for their decisions on how the story unfolds. Much love to the Author for creating a masterpiece for the reader despite their personal setbacks. Thank You for reading my ted talk.
Hiii I can recommend this book to you even though it been a while since the last update.
I do love our MC. He is strong and doesn't let himself down. There is a time skip but Author explain everything by one by so it is not that confusing.
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Such a lovely book. You can read it two, #For the ๐rainbow tribe๐ป๐ป
Catched my interest immediately with the amazing writing, the wonderful characters and the great storyline, and it really kept me interested throughout all of the story.
I did not think that I would like this story and almost stopped reading it but I forced myself to go on. I'm glad that I did because I really like it. I'm also hoping that Asher and Will become bonded mates. I will definitely tell my friends about this story and Author.
Do yourself a favor And read this. its not done as of 05/07/21 but it has been a wIld ride. this will probably be one of the most gut wrenching/ anixety ridden booms you will read. I seriously could not put down this book. There were so many monets that I was shocked and happy. Im very excited to see the end.
I feel bad for all that Will has been through, but I really like how heโs trying to overcome it. Thereโs some spelling errors but overall itโs great. Iโm sometimes too into the story that I feel like Iโm part of it. I sometimes even donโt sleep to continue reading lol. Anyway, keep up the good work, canโt wait to finish this! [img=recommend]
this was Soo good I'm hooked and waiting for the next chapter ๐โบ๏ธโบ๏ธโบ๏ธ Like I'm finna go read all her/him/their works till this one updates ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ
I have spent the better part of the last 72 hours reading this, the emotions this book has been able to pull from me speaks to the authors amazing talent. I have never wanted a character to redeem themselves, or feel the struggle and pain of characters as they make decisions with consequences. I'm happy, sad, angry and feeling as much a part of their lives.
take those warning seriously for this masterpiece this is not for the faint of heart.
This book is my favourite book on this app, I highly recommend it.
It starts off a bit sketchy but quickly develops into an amazing story with a story line that really makes you feel like you are living through the MCs life along with his friends.
this book literally made me go through all these emotions (sometimes all in one chapter) โบ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ฏ๐๐๐๐ ๐ฌ๐ก๐ข๐ฎ๐ฃ๐ค๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ง๐จ๐ฉ๐ฐ๐๐ฑ๐ฒ๐ณ๐ต๐ถ๐ท๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ญ๐๐๐๐๐๐ซ
I am sorry...
Disclaimer: i read dedicatly till 54 but after that i constantly skipped the chapters.
With all honesty heres my review
Oh god! This was toooo dramatic (like i dont think there was any rest in this roller coaster). i know dramas are needed in stories but this was too much of drama and excessive is never good.
I didnt feel connected to any of the characters (not even the mc). There were so many charater that came out of nowhere, without explaination. so i was confused the whole time.
talking about mc, he was my god! So fristrating!
Writing:
Its was good. but i cant deny that there were times when i would srunch in dissatisfaction with the continues use of โiโ
Its like after i did this i did that and then i went there, i grabbed my bag.
Which was a huge turn off for me.
Plot:
I cant really say as i dont havent read it dedicatly and i have read it riligiously.
But as much as i have read, it couldnt see the purpose. maybe its just beacuse i came thinking it was all about romance and was dissapointed. but too much of twist and turn can get you dizzy.
I am sorry i was brutually honest but i was just frustrated... might delete it after i come down from my frustration....
im not exaggerating when i say this is one of the best bls I have read. it verry suspenseful definetly the type of book to keep you on the edge of your seat. i also love the wrighting style.
I was really really interested with this story not until I reached the point where I don't know what is happening anymore. For S scenes this is indeed good a read the thing that'll make u question is how does the mc's head work. tho he did experience trauma and some sort the way he lives is actually not that different to what he did. and besides that was his ffated alpha, if he did really not want anything with him why still act like he's still hoping, the plot around chap 30+ got me dropping the novel but I'm still thankful the author shared their story for free I'm rreally just dropping an honest review. I hope this won't make u stop writing or discourage u or some sort. Take care.
This story needs trigger warnings!!!
There is constant rape of the male lead, heavy abuse, forced mating and forced pregnancy.
Although i can appreciate a super dark ABO and twisted prostitution stories I only feel frustrated reading this. I think the bad things happening to the male lead could be avoided if he actually behaved like someone who has been through what he has been through. Just bc you are used to abuse doesnโt mean you stop caring abt the consequences of your actions and start living like a naive idiot. A strong character learns from past mistakes. Itโs painful to read bc the constant bad decisions feel like a cover up for plot devices being thrown in MLโs path to keep his fate extra miserable. And his friends look away when it counts, i donโt get it, they are always there to console him but never really to prevent shit from happening. Sometimes all they need to do is talk to him but they donโt!
I dunno, i bet the author had other intentions but at around chapter 50 I now feel like everybody (even the good guys by not doing anything) messed up so bad that itโs unfixable - some things just remain unforgivable no matter what. especially when weโre talking trauma. if certain things are fixed or looked over it would feel wrong. But the story slowly deconstructs its own main character and LIs to deliver plot. I honestly hoped this was abt overcoming fate but the flow of the story is so ambivalent that i donโt see it happening - honestly ML acts like he wants to be taken advantage of so i donโt even care anymore if he reunites with his rapist ๐ช i donโt want to read a story i stopped caring about, just for the thrill of reading what happens next.
I tried to like this story but i give up. Sorry this review is so long but i just had the urge to warn some people who read the beginning in hope for a wholesome ending...
To the author iโd like to say this is a good start for a dark Abo, iโve read far far worse. please donโt take this as discouragement. I think you tried to deliver a self destructing but strong character and everyone has their own opinion on which behaviour is believable or not. itโs also really hard to choose every detail right when incorporating it into a romance plot with big twists.
I love this book so much! Five stars! I barely have any real books but if this was a physical book i would buy it in an instant! I love the story development with Will and Asher, even though some peopme still favor Jayden even though hes a lying rapist...
I hope Ash and Willโs love will prosper, and i hope Jayden will get what he deserves, dying, at LEAST life in prison.
I mean, cmon people, how can you just support a rapist? ASH IS A KING EVEN THOUGH THERES NO CHEMISTRY BETWEEN HIM AND WILL. HES ALWAYS BEEN THERE FOR WILL, FRIEND OR OTHER.
This story is fantastic! Riviting, emotional, real, just smutty enough :) I find myself actually talking to the characters at random points in the book!! ... Looking forward to Author-san sharing more of their talent and hard work!
very heart touching story I loved to read till the end please post more chapters[img=update][img=update] waiting to read more[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love the development of the story! it has come so far, I love all the characters especially our newest couple of our two young boys, and now all I'm really waiting is if destined partners will truly be broken so our protagonist can live his life happily ever after~โค๏ธ
Shin19Rai