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Hey man you doing alright, your last updates, stuff didn't seem to be going all that well. Your stories are great and entertaining so I do hope everything is alright
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Great story biut the update is disappointing so you should post a lot more ─=≡Σ(╯°□°)╯︵┻┻ (ಠ_ಠ)>⌐■-■ ..............,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,. , , .,,.,.,.,.,. ,
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(No spoilers for ch>5) This story is really good! It reminds me of "You have 48 hours a day". The concept is interesting and relatively novel. I liked it even though I hate isekais with more than 1 traveller. The MC has a huge advantage and he fully uses it. There are some mistakes (both grammar and plot-wise) but they aren't too annoying. It was a fun read and I can't wait for new chapters!
after a long time i read a decent fanfic which has a good story. I don't generally write reviews but you know when you find something good you have to appreciate it. and believe me I am so lazy and still writing this review that means novel is gooooooooooooooooood.
I really like the story and structure of the world, as well as the balance of character development. I like that in fact its only advantage is knowledge of the history of the world. also that you can see the efforts of the protagonist.
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Mano melhor fan fic de todos os tempos recomendo muito não vou falar nada sobre ela quero que vocês vejam por si .........................................................................
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The author is aliveeeeeee!!! All hail author-kun. Good luck on your recovery. Hope you stay strong and healthy. Love the work fam. Hoping to see more of your works. But no rush, stick at your pace. And health comes first.
I really like your fanfic ... damn this is really cool to read, as if I actually read an official novel ... but I don't want your fanfic story to be stopped and I hope you are always healthy
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damn needed to review this thing. pretty good story. enjoyed it till 4am in the morning. cant stop reading hopefully more chapters to come. thanks for the story.
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great book 10 out of 10 would recommend and for a song made by a mad king to get 140 words Gunter, why did you gunt my fries? I gunted them, and they were mine. What kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries, And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes? Gunter, there were tears there. If you gunted them, would you even care?Gunter, do you even love me?
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Really like the concept of the story and it’s good so far . ......................................................................... ......
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this is good. i don't know how too stretch that out enough to fill the word count so---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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The story was good the first few chapters but it degraded to something unreadable in the recent chapters.. some chapters were just too much info dump and the essay like writing made it unbearable read. Had to skip them with just a look
Good story, amazing background finish, and also amazing character development. It sometimes get confusing but judging from your replies i imply that thats your goal so who am i to complain when the story is good keep it up
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Continue o trabalho bom e interessante pois é difícil encontrar um fanfic como esse hoje em dia pois era tendo muitos fanfic com harem e sem história pra contar como o seu. Bom e isso contínuo o bom trabalho e parabens pela história que você tá fazendo mesmo que baseado e misturado em outras história existente.
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Lots of stupid things but good story.. well I just feel like the rating is too high for its actual value so I'm gonna reduce it's rating. Lots of stupid things but good story.. well I just feel like the rating is too high for its actual value so I'm gonna reduce it's rating
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Hey man you doing alright, your last updates, stuff didn't seem to be going all that well. Your stories are great and entertaining so I do hope everything is alright
Vraiment bonne histoire en fait ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Great story biut the update is disappointing so you should post a lot more ─=≡Σ(╯°□°)╯︵┻┻ (ಠ_ಠ)>⌐■-■ ..............,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,. , , .,,.,.,.,.,. ,
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(No spoilers for ch>5) This story is really good! It reminds me of "You have 48 hours a day". The concept is interesting and relatively novel. I liked it even though I hate isekais with more than 1 traveller. The MC has a huge advantage and he fully uses it. There are some mistakes (both grammar and plot-wise) but they aren't too annoying. It was a fun read and I can't wait for new chapters!
after a long time i read a decent fanfic which has a good story. I don't generally write reviews but you know when you find something good you have to appreciate it. and believe me I am so lazy and still writing this review that means novel is gooooooooooooooooood.
I really like the story and structure of the world, as well as the balance of character development. I like that in fact its only advantage is knowledge of the history of the world. also that you can see the efforts of the protagonist.
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Mano melhor fan fic de todos os tempos recomendo muito não vou falar nada sobre ela quero que vocês vejam por si .........................................................................
Excepcional buen libro 💕👀💕👀😓😈🖐💤😓😈👍😅😓😓😓🖐😪😓😈💤🖐👍🥵😪🥵💤🤔🖐😈👀👀🥵😈😏🥚🙊👍💕😪😘😪🥚😈😣😈🥚👀😈😈👀👀🥚🥚🥚🥚🥚🥚🥚🥚🥚😣🥚🥚🥚🥚🥚🥚
The author is aliveeeeeee!!! All hail author-kun. Good luck on your recovery. Hope you stay strong and healthy. Love the work fam. Hoping to see more of your works. But no rush, stick at your pace. And health comes first.
I really like your fanfic ... damn this is really cool to read, as if I actually read an official novel ... but I don't want your fanfic story to be stopped and I hope you are always healthy
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damn needed to review this thing. pretty good story. enjoyed it till 4am in the morning. cant stop reading hopefully more chapters to come. thanks for the story.
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great book 10 out of 10 would recommend and for a song made by a mad king to get 140 words Gunter, why did you gunt my fries? I gunted them, and they were mine. What kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries, And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes? Gunter, there were tears there. If you gunted them, would you even care?Gunter, do you even love me?
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Really like the concept of the story and it’s good so far . ......................................................................... ......
Exp.................................. ..................................... ................................ ............................. ...........................
this is good. i don't know how too stretch that out enough to fill the word count so---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Shorei, shoraste? Shorei, shoraste? Shorei, shoraste? Shorei, shoraste? Shorei, shoraste? Shorei, shoraste? Shorei, shoraste? Shorei, shoraste? Shorei, shoraste? Shorei, shoraste? Shorei, shoraste? Shorei, shoraste? Shorei, shoraste? Shorei, shoraste? Shorei, shoraste? Shorei, shoraste?
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The story was good the first few chapters but it degraded to something unreadable in the recent chapters.. some chapters were just too much info dump and the essay like writing made it unbearable read. Had to skip them with just a look
Good story, amazing background finish, and also amazing character development. It sometimes get confusing but judging from your replies i imply that thats your goal so who am i to complain when the story is good keep it up
)uvytyu7bygv8yv8yv8ygygu0g0ug9gug9yg0ug9ugyg9ygyg6bobigc6rcohvutv7crcohvohv8tc8hbihv6rc7tvt7ctvtvcpuvouvy8b8ycoyvpyc9yvoyvy9v9vyv9gjv9uv8yvjp8yc7rexw6xufhv7cyvitxrc5
Continue o trabalho bom e interessante pois é difícil encontrar um fanfic como esse hoje em dia pois era tendo muitos fanfic com harem e sem história pra contar como o seu. Bom e isso contínuo o bom trabalho e parabens pela história que você tá fazendo mesmo que baseado e misturado em outras história existente.
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Lots of stupid things but good story.. well I just feel like the rating is too high for its actual value so I'm gonna reduce it's rating. Lots of stupid things but good story.. well I just feel like the rating is too high for its actual value so I'm gonna reduce it's rating