Reviews of (Un) Fortunately the Yandere is Not After Me by bigbear51 - Webnovel

Story is more realistic approach to relationships as of chapter 12. Many of the girls have fallen for the main character's friend. However what ensues seems to the mc stealing waifu's off of the friends harem. Over all the world is nothing special with barely any time describing it( seems to be classic modern world) The characters have some personality but seem a bit forgettable at time. Writing quality is good, the update stability in this opening segment seems good. So far the plot has not had any super obvious plot holes, just wish it had some more cute moments.

From what I can see in the synopsis. Your story basically seens like those one-shot manga that people tend to ignore after some chapters. Well, I can only say that you have quite the bomb in your hands. Just like a double-edged sword your novel has both the potential to be great and to suck... Being a writer is by no means easy. Although I admit that I'm no competent novelist, personally I feel plenty experienced regarding readers's likes and dislikes. This novel has a theme that escapes from the stereotypes of this app although not in a good way honestly. Your MC seens to be those wimpy useless guys the majority of readers despise, the "beta male" they say... Personally I'm not against shy or wimpy MCs since I identify myself in them and also because of Character Development. And about the heroines... Well, Reading the synopsis I already have a bad inpression of them honestly. A lot of readers here avoid stories like yours Just like the plague because of a lot of factors, and one of them is not wanting to experience new themes. Despite this review I'm a bit open-minded towards new ideias so I'm looking forward to your story, just as I said before, this is a double-edged sword. It will depend on you the author to make this crazy thing an enjoyable experience. I did not read any chapters before writing this Review also... I gave 5 stars to support the author ;) Keep up the good work

I like the story so far, I like how the mc slowly building up relationship with other characters and I also liked the drama. Overall this is great! Keep up the good work author 👍

It's a great story with a great plot. Though there are some spelling issues with the early chapters, but that doesn't hinder the story in any way. The other thing I have a problem with is the world background, 1.) theres no exact date that the story was set in and 2.) we where never told the city\area of where the story takes place in, BUT THIS STORY IS THE BEST STORY IVE READ SO FAR on this platform atleast :)

It was pleasant to read, i liked the idea of multiple ending route at the end, even though there are obviously a lack of character development for some of them because there are just too many girl in the harem at the end.

This is an incredible story. It felt like I was reading the script of a rom/com anime. This became my favourite webnovel I read in this app till now. Thank u so much author for writing this beautiful and enjoyable story

A slice-of-life story that is nicely drawn out in away that makes the story feel more natural. It started and ended great. There is not much to say without spoilers, except for I highly recommend it.

This. This is the greatest romance novel I have ever read. And though I dont read a lot if romance novels, I know for a fact once you start read you wont stop.

Was a bit skeptical about reading this at first but the more i read into it the more i became invested in the story and its characters. Its very addicting Every waifu here is good so its hard to cheer for a certain one T_T i hope everyone is happy in the end. Arata needs a break PS i've read your other works and they're equally nice, you really know how to keep your readers wanting more I hope you keep up the good work author.

kinda sad to see most of your book is underrated even though it is better that 70% of overrated novel/fanfiction here in webnovel. I mean all of your book is a gem that with a little polish and it will shine brighter than other gems. And keep up the good works bro, I'll support you

this is an amazing story. there are alot of interesting characters, and even though they are cliche they feel very developed. i got so invested into it.

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its a good romcom, better than most, though its more on the romantic side than the comedic one. Character development is also good, the characters are pretty interesting, there's not to many many noticable plotholes either, it's also pretty realistic so that's a plus. I'm also quite surprised not many people read this hidden gem, though, that's kind of a blessing in disguise because the chapters won't be locked. It's good good read

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I thought it's a typical harem but well...Let me give you a definition of harem. Harem- group of females sharing a single male. Remove the tag. Please.

if this is a novel that at the end after everything the MC picks just one girl and dumps the remaining, just know author I'll find you and m*rder you in your sleep

I can’t believe I read all the up to date chapters, I can’t wait to see who he end up with, even tho it’s kinda obvious. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=recommend][img=fp][img=fp][img=update][img=fp][img=update][img=recommend]

I'm admiring the story and plot... The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna wriggle and feel tingly within. If you don't mind, please read my web novel, too: - Let Me Choose You - Who Are You - Facing Into The Sky Thanks🤍🤍🤍

It's not a bad story but it seem more of your beta mc harems . When you see harem tag you would expect at least 2 ppl to be with the mc not 1. Japan has abused the crap out of the tag turning almost every mc into a beta mc, and not actually having a harem but a struggle through romance. Story is still ongoing so I could be wrong but up to 100 it's up come back to read after it gains more chapters if still on the same route up have to drop, for a simple reason it's not a harem ... good character development though.

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Me like disss...

It’s honestly just a nice romcom. All of the characters are pretty interesting and the story is the type of thing that you don’t see very often on this site whatsoever. Overall good stuff.

What a light-hearted novel. Like it. It is just me, or sometimes I forget who's the character it is? (Btw, I'm still in Chapter27).........

I would really enjoy later chapters that include mc's kin as well as fleshing out and reaffirming some of the characters when they reappear such as that girl from Yogi's trip with the athlete, she gives bitchy vibes but she is so subtle that I feel like I'm imagining it. And furthermore I really want to see a scene with the big sister expressing her opinion on her little brothers sudden socialization

Bom eu não sou muito bom em criticas, mas vou deixar um comentário para apoiar o autor, porque esta historia tem potencial. Ate agora a história está em um ritmo lento, o autor esta levando o seu tempo com a construção de personalidades dos personagem apresentados ate agora, o que eu gosto muito, pois faz o personagem mas reais e humanos, o que muitos outros autores acaba negligenciando em suas historias. Deixei 5 estrela para apoiar o autor continua o bom trabalho

Okay, I am still not reading it, this review was for the guys that first write a review. And given that in the first review must be hard on author, and I felt that, just slightly. For all of the readers, you didn't pay him to write and your reading is free, so why give 1 star and criticism if you don't like the novel. And first of all, I like this kind of novel, call it a fetish but I like mew things. 😌

this book honestly seems like its for people w/ that digusting ntr fetish . lame af.. stupid 140 character bs 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎