Reviews of The Adventures of Naruto & Scarlet by BlueObserver - Webnovel

They may be a lot of grammaticale errors but the plot... is so cool I think it's worth reading.

I love the read but I’m wondering if this story was dropped because it says last update 3 years ago

Good novel if you like the Naruto genre. However the mc seems like an add on to the story and her actions dint affect the world around her so far. Seems like some side character that makes the plot play out the same way as cannon no matter what

Only hear to comment on writing quality, haven’t read much, like chapter 10 or so, but whoever said the quality is great needs their eyes checked. It’s definitely readable, but nowhere near great. Periods after a space, names not capitalized, commas need to be used, bunch of other small things that make it annoying to read

please continue this is one of the better ff I have read on the naruto world without crossovers I get sometimes why ff are dropped but still please continue. I love the character development. the possible love intrest is actually very fascinating and the character growth with saskue is definitely a different spin

Im sorry but this literally a rip off of Goddess of Ice: Reborn as Naruto’s Twin sister. There are so many grammatical errors it hurts to read, pacing is all over the place, and there is absolutely nothing original about it. It completly skips the begining of their life unlike Goddess of Ice, with the sorry excuse of “you will get your memories back later.” I highly recommend you go read Goddess of Ice if you want essentially the same plot with far better writing quality, characters, and absolutely hilarious.

Poor english Sloppy writting style No originality. Almost plagiarized from another twin naruto fanfic Plain and undeveloped characters. But the idea was good at first

lovely story the slow pacing allowed me to pay attention to each character individually. all in all it's great would love to see follow it till the end

Nice and pls keep updating. I like your pace style of story telling. Just make sure to flash out the main cast a bit more personality wise. So, lots of love and support for your work.

I live for Sasuke’s crush on MC, it is sooo cute! I mean just look at this stubborn little tomato loving muffin!❤️🍅❤️🍅❤️🍅❤️ I think I hear wedding bells!🎊👰🏼‍♀️🤵🏻🎊👰🏼‍♀️🤵🏻🎊👰🏼‍♀️🤵🏻🎊 🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻

A solid fanfic. Although I've already read a similar fanfic, this one was still good, and added original content. Scarlet is a great MC, and she really adds to the plot. Writing quality could be better though. Biggest disappointment is that the story hasn't been updated in a long time. Hope the author comes back and continues!

Pleaaaseee dont drop the book. its one of the best i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am in literal love with this book !!!!

Menurutku ini cerita yang sangat, MC tidak mengejar kekuatan secara membabi buta seperti fanfic lainnya, Cerita ini juga menekankan pada aspek-aspek emosional seperti pengalaman masa lalu dalam mengejar kekuasaan. Hanya satu-satunya yang menyebalkan disini mengapa tim 7 secara tidak dapat di jelaskan memiliki 4 orang?

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Is this drpped it last updated 8mths ago??? Word count: Jehwusjjxhsiwhdbcuishebbfhfjrhrbfhdhjekwkwjdjhhskakhsjhdjsiwkehhsjsjwisisjsjwjwiiwiwjwjejejsiididjejejejejejejjeirjrjrjdjdjjdejjdidid

La protagonista no cambia mucho las cosas pero algunas cosas si. Es seria cuando lo requiere y divertida cuando no

•It was amazing though I hope you can update soon please.🥺😊Also the story development was on the right past not to fast but not to slow either so over all love the story but please like I said before update more if you not to busy.

I usualy don't review but seeing all the 5 star review here is unusual because from what i see now (im at chapter 20) the story is good dont get me wrong I would give 5 star... if only the writing wasnt that bad, I see some words missing in sentence one chapter I think he messed up the name and the construction of your sentence is weird, the only thing I can say is get an editor or strive to rework your chapter before sending more new chapter... good story tho and will continu to read it.

I don't know y but I won't read fanfic with FM, probably because I am part of milf sect who want my fav milf as a love interest in my fav story. Any have a 5☆ as encouragement. ALL HAIL MILF-SECT

One of good naruto fanfic that i can enjoy 😍😍😍 it is good and you can enjoy the plot. While it is not perfect and need some improveme t, it is good enough

It is a great novel..I highly recommend every other naruto fan as well as other people to this novel. You will find that the characters are properly executed. I find that the novel is highly to my liking probably due to the fact that I have always been itching to go to an anime world myself....but let's be real who hasn't which is precisely why this novel is a great find.

Hello Blue, I'm being a little shameless here. I have been reading your novel and it inspired me to do my own fan fiction. I don't own a word program and am to lazy to constantly correct my grammar. Even though English is my second language since my family speaks Spanish. Like others have said love the constant updates but feel them a little short and sometimes u need more dialog. Then again I do the same sometimes on my new novel. I want you to check I out and give me your opinion about chapter if possible based on story not grammar since I know I mess up here and there. Here is the link of my fanfic. Usually based on 3rd point of view, 1st point of view and the thoughts of the main character. I have not done much about point of views of other characters. The name of the fanfic is Reborn as a Sarutobi in the Shinobi world. Or something similar to it. It doesn't have a picture. I still trying to figure out how to do that and it's been months. Damn phone making everything hard. Sincerely: IntactReincarnator

this is just sugestion there are many loophole with this story and passive with how the story goes and how much she remember cant she think going change with how much power she have like kill danzo and she have knowlege about uzumaki why not build clan uzumaki again.

Thanks you please do not stop.

already watched boruto: naruto's next generation? boruto is son of naruto and in episode 129, he travels to the past shortly after sasuke leaves the village to train with orochimaru, when he goes to the past, he ends up meeting his father: naruto, the mother: hinata, anyway everybody very young. I would like to know if you are going to create a chapter based on this episode. I don't know if you've watched it, if not, you can read a review ... just the fact that escarlet meets his nephew ahead of time ...

Loving the story so far keep at it! Good overall character development and it doesn't deviate to far from the original storyline and the oc is great.

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Good writing evwn though the pace is abit slow. Would be nice to see scarlet with someone else and pulling pranks on the anubu as well as see her go head to head against Danso. Hopefully upates won't stop.

It's awesome because I've been searching about naruto that has a lovesick Uchiha Sasuke and a new character/s that can change the shinobi world

A counselor does not abandon the other characters of the Naruto series, for example I find that sakura even if it turns out that it is a jug it is also part of teams 7 makes it interact more with the team. I noticed that she very quickly gave up. Wait to see more. contine See you Ouvrir dans Google Traduction