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Augustine_Antony_1217
Dude the character is so op but at first I didn't like when you removed system.. after he become devil God I don't care ... character development of mc and all other characters and mc way of speaking is cool.. I love how you treated issei he deserves that.... I like vali x Rias and Valarie tapes ...overall 4.8/5
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HENTIKID
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Animefan_1
I think this writing quality was not that good I can't complain my books are even worse. I have no clue about stable uploads since the story was published like 3 years ago I don't know if I'm going to read the other book he published. Its high school DXD what can I say about build world building. I don't think the characters went through that much character development if any but I only read the chapters 81 so I don't know if this changed at the end of the story.
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DaoistVNHpaA
There were some negative comments so I was reluctant to read but I decided to read and decide for myself if the story is good or not. you did not disappoint Author good work.
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SHU_63
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SHU_63

other reviews aren't doing justice to this fic...... this isn't best fic out here but it isn't as bad as other reviews portrayed it either... others were saying something about mc being slave to system he tossed the system aside after system was forcing him to do something he didn't wanted to so those reviews were meaningless. Overall it's a good fic, if you are hesitant after reading those reviews don't worry and just dive in it is a fun read.
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BOBsonofROB_Uchiha
writing isn't bad bud the whole story is that's why 1 star. also, author don't confuse this with me hating your story or anything. it's hard writing a story and finishing uploading it. you did both which I respect. also, some people out there will love your novel. it's just not made for me.
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lex_rei
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lex_rei

2nd read though liked the story. it does what it Was anounced to do Not the best but i like it alot for only 130 chapters to Focus on a lot of plot it is already a wonder how mich Charakter detail was done. for a kinda New author it is a good Story whished for a less monoton writing styl but it got better over time way to go but still otherwose thanks for the story ima go give your other Storys a try
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KINGZed
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KINGZed

it's a good novel. hope to see this kind of fan fiction again
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AllSeeingBedroom
to make balance ..............................................................................................................................
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FrogGodKing
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour Β½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs Β½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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paulo_nabor
like the story . m m . ................................................................ . ............... . . .
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Oblivion21
Great Fanfic and the mc is not a pushover that does whatever the system tells him. I highly recommend this author and his novels. πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°
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Mastersun
This story disappointed me very much and I decided to abandon it after chapter 15 because I can't force myself to read it any further...............
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DURJOY_Barua
Ok can we talk about the title, I mean what do you mean by golden king of lucifer REALLY now. You should change that title bruh it's sounds weird and looks weird.
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Mathias_Irusta
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Alex_Santo
this was an awesome story with an awesome and OP MC and I am using this story as inspiration for my own and now I have only one thing left to say #longlivetheoutcasts
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Ofis_chan
Π― Π½Π΅ ΠΌΠΎΠ³Ρƒ это Ρ‡ΠΈΡ‚Π°Ρ‚ΡŒ, " Ρ‚Ρ‹ Π³ΠΎΠ²ΠΎΡ€ΠΈΡˆΡŒ, гильгамСш? Если ΠΎΠ½ Π΅Π³ΠΎ ΠΏΠΎΡ‚ΠΎΠΌΠΎΠΊ ΠΈ ΠΏΠΎΡ‚ΠΎΠΌΠΎΠΊ Π»ΡŽΡ†ΠΈΡ„Π΅Ρ€Π°, Ρ‚ΠΎ ΠΎΠ½ Π²Ρ…ΠΎΠ΄ΠΈΡ‚ Π² 5 Π»ΡƒΡ‡ΡˆΠΈΡ…, Π³Π΄Π΅ Π±Π»ΡΡ‚ΡŒ Π»ΠΎΠ³ΠΈΠΊΠ°? Π”Π°Π»ΡŒΡˆΠ΅ Ρ‡ΠΈΡ‚Π°Ρ‚ΡŒ Π½Π΅ стал, Π΄ΡƒΠΌΠ°Π» Ρ‚Π΅Ρ€ΠΏΠΈΠΌΠΎ, Π½ΠΎ Π½Π΅Ρ‚ Π½Π°Ρ…ΡƒΠΉ, ΠΏΠΎΡ‡Π΅ΠΌΡƒ ΠΊΠ°ΠΊ Π½ΠΈ Ρ„Π°Π½Ρ„ΠΈΠΊ, Ρ‚Π°ΠΊ Π΅Π±ΡƒΡ‡ΠΈΠΉ Π³Π°Ρ€Π΅ΠΌ, Ρ‚Π°ΠΊ Π΅Ρ‰Π΅ ΠΎΠ½ Π½Π΅ добивался этих Π΄Π΅Π²ΡƒΡˆΠ΅ΠΊ, Π° ΠΎΠ½ΠΈ сами Π΅ΠΌΡƒ Π½Π° Ρ…ΡƒΠΉ ΠΏΡ€Ρ‹Π³Π°Π»ΠΈ сходу, ΠΈ Π΄Π°, Π±ΠΎΠ΅Π²Ρ‹Π΅ маньяки это Ρ‚Π΅ люди, ΠΊΠΎΡ‚ΠΎΡ€Ρ‹Π΅ ΠΏΠΎΠ»ΡƒΡ‡Π°ΡŽΡ‚ ΡƒΠ΄ΠΎΠ²ΠΎΠ»ΡŒΡΡ‚Π²ΠΈΠ΅ ΠΎΡ‚ Π‘Π ΠΠ–Π•ΠΠ˜Π™, ΠΊΠΎΠ³Π΄Π° тСбя ΠΌΠΎΠ³ΡƒΡ‚ Π·Π°Ρ€ΡƒΠ±ΠΈΡ‚ΡŒ, Ρ‚Π°ΠΊ Π³Π΄Π΅ ΠΎΠ½ Π±ΠΎΠ΅Π²ΠΎΠΉ маньяк, Ссли ΠΏΡ€ΠΈ Π±ΠΈΡ‚Π²Π΅ ΠΎΠ½ просто ΡŽΠ·Π°Π΅Ρ‚ Π½Π΅ΠΎΡΡΠ·Π°Π΅ΠΌΠΎΡΡ‚ΡŒ ΠΈ Ρ‚Π°ΠΊ дСрСтся, это Π³Π»ΡƒΠΏΠΎ, ΠΊΠ°ΠΊ ΠΏΠΎ ΠΌΠ½Π΅πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜
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Researcher12345
It is a very good fanfic. I really liked how he threw the system away. but i don't like the part where he forgives his enemies just because his lover said so. the mc is very op but due to the plot i didnt get bored.
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DaoisttG3KuY
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Noname_nobody
It's interesting, but too fast and easy to read .
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Jimbai3870
This is trash. I don’t understand who reviews these things are they bots? How did it even get to 4 stars man. I get it that English may not be your first language but there are programs to help with that.
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JugemuX2
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LuciferSTAR
MC Escravo, MC Beta, totalmente lixo burro e idiota mentalmente, Simplesmente horrΓ­vel, Perda de tempo isso aqui Γ© trΓ‘gico quando um idiota cucked escreve uma fic
2yr
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Crow_of_approval
The beginning was ok but the further the story went the more I just cringed. I also found it hard to read. I don't mean to put the author down but the story just failed when the system deleting themself. It was pointless and made no sense at all. I know how hard it is to write a book so I feel a bit sorry for being this harsh. But I am impressed by your willingness and seemingly determination to continue writing this story.for that I applaud you
2yr
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Faris_Daniel_3128
in my opinion who never followed highschool dxd but just know about it, this is a good fanfic. at least the author already knows how to finish this novel and there is no dimensional shift.
2yr
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R_O_B
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R_O_B

es una buena historia, simple y entretenida, aunque al principio puede parecer super op después te das cuenta que es parte de la historia y se te pasa, aunque no tiene lemon la imaginación hace su trabajo y aunque el desarrollo de personaje es algo vago es aceptable, buena obra‘‘‘
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Orvar
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Orvar

This is a cognitohazard, it was okay at the start, a little cheesy, but it was fine, around where MC fights Tiamat it all goes down hill, the writing and grammar is good at least
2yr
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Hazito
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Hazito

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2yr
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