There is no romance. The author said the love intrest is megan fox but all that happens is the mc enslaves her.
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I voted like 10 stones when are you going to make a new chapters.g gh uryryeyry re uytyr j.g return j.g f j.g f j.g f red f rdd hff ryuu iihf eye uht eu tree ryuu uytyr guy jug
this would've been good if the mc is not so manipulative i mean you said mikaela is the main heroine but she was just manipulated so yeah,it looks like the author is portraiting a smart,savior good guy but what u got is a manipulative power hungry mc that makes excuses of trying to save earth.So much potential but got wasted on the mc
I stopped reading cuz the main character seems evil diabolical kind of sinister not a good guy and I've always been a fan of the good guy and the underdog but this is not that other than that it was pretty good
I'm going to make this pencil disappear
how many of your friends have i killed
i got jokes ro maybe riddils
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The Fan-Fic had great world building and drive, but there wasnβt enough details to fill in most of the plot holes, the chapters werenβt long enough and the character development was terrible.
Don't you dare drop this or I will find you and HAKAI you.
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Great book with amazing potential. I honestly hope the author chooses to stick with this book. If they do, I will become faithful student and keep reading!
This novel is original. You're warned. Don't be surprised by the Opening (in a novel. Yeah I know it's crazy) or the astronomical amount of A/N (polls, reports about polls or information that author wants to convey). Besides all this it's a good story, a great story even, a little fast-paced but it's good like that. I want two things for this novel:
1- More chapters (real chapters)
2- Delete the A/N when they are obsolete.
Horrible writing / badly developed dio character / re-edited some chapters and developed more because in less than 10 chapters the jojo bow is finished / OP character too fast chapter 3, he is already a power monster and the OC character is too spoiled by useless times skip to finish the bow.
Author, please redo your story to make it plausible.
Miguel_Rosalez