I absolutely love the story and the author. It provides such a new and refreshing take on Naruto but doesn’t take away the charm that Naruto already has. I would recommend this book to anyone who wants a Naruto fan-fiction that sticks to the original but provides enough originality that doesn’t make it seem overly reliant on the original story.
Overall great fan-fic and hope it doesn’t get dropped🙏
So it was a reincarnation story anyway? I really had my hopes up. Include a reincarnation tag so people like me don't get this disappointed. You could have EASILY just made this an alternate Naruto timeline where this new Yamanaka existed and became his friend but no you had to make it a reincarnation story and completely ruin it.
As you might be able to tell. I'm not mad, I'm just disappointed.
I would say that, your fanfic is almost a revision of naruto. Mostly logical and reasonable, Just enough change in the right areas, and even if some parts are outrageous, they are still in the realm of possibility within the parameters of naruto universe.
One thing I like most about your fanfic is the length of the chapters, the way you layout each arc, and the flow of the story along with the TPO of each event that happens.
I hope that he will rediscover his clans lost arts though. Too much emphisis is placed on the storm lineage for his power. Place more events for the mind jutsus and such.
I love this fanfic up there with Kurama and Me