Chapter comments on the chapter Inefficient to get attention of the book Livid Guardian's Endless Coddling

At first, i was confused whether Rian is a boy or a girl. Hahaha

It's very sad. She had only father and she lost him too

That is so sad. It sucks to lose your parents. It's hard to snap out of it too. My heart is with you Aria. Alan is sweet to try to comfort her.

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Wow

This is really sad

Here I am again reading this book for the 6th time.

nice story

I'm new here - I've been reading the novels for a while now, but haven't commented. This story has hooked me! Excellent work so far! ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

I feel sorry for her

Author, all that hv read so far is good. The Morgan family are really pure souls

it's worth reading but this chapter got me emotional

So far so good

This chapter wasn't edited quite as well as the first chapter. I found too many problems to point out though... The problems that stood out the most are amusing malapropisms - that is where a wrong word was used instead of the right word which turned the sentence kind of funny because it still makes sense, just not the sense you wanted. Eg. aboard instead of abroad. On the other hand, the story is progressing pretty well. Some of the jumping flashbacks could have been clearer or shorter. I got confused a few times. Keep up the good work!

what about the grandfather? did he die?

It's really heart breaking 💔😭

Till far I like the story