Chapter comments on the chapter Every Beginning Must have an End (2) of the book Science/Magic

I'm not crying, I swear! It's the onion ninja.

Reading this at 1 half in the morning break me into tears both from tiredness and sadness. Huuhuuu

A one sided love and the mc couldn't even see that so disappointing she only saw him as a son 😑😑😑😑😑

Not gonna lie, I'm crying like a baby right now.

*inserts insensitive comment*

so instead of giving him hope she crushes his heart?

cry

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Thanks

im crying lol

Although i was expecting it ..... It still hit like a MadaFakAr truck. Hope that mc finally grows.(second time) Even after all of this,if the mc is still childish ,it’ll just be a disappointment .

I just hope that this is the first and the last time you do something like this, Author. Because it's stuff like this that make people hate a series. So, if it keeps happening again and again, more people will quit than would have even if the story was boring. Most people don't like watching innocent people die, no matter what the reason. Especially so, if they have started liking the person. And what you did here is, you built up a very likable character, made them very important to the MC, and then, went ahead and made them die like Padme Skywalker (as in the giving up on life part, not the Vader choking part)...

Nothing like a good cry

Perhaps a large portion of the toxic reader base has lost interest by now

Damn....

Ugh ugh

thanks for the chapter

A masterpiece.

Aw man, i knew this would happen, but man those damn ninja keep throwing onion at me