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DaoisttG3KuY
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SeraphinaRobbins24
This story is one of the most interesting that I've ever read on here! I love how the MC has so much power and is so smart about how to use it! Good work! I can't wait to read more!
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Random_Dude_0069
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LionessLover
Boring (extensive food and meal descriptions - is this another cooking show clone? boring long dialogs - a style invented to add word count while not having to write much story, grammar issues (mixing of tenses).
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Ariyu_S
Iβm glad to feast both my eyes and mind on this amazing original webnovel. The world and characters will grow onto you. Coupled with the good writing, you will be in for a rollercoaster ride with the fellow protagonists! Thankful to author-sama for completing this. If its a novel in hardcopy format, I wouldnt mind purchasing it π Hope that more webnovel readers could stumble upon this gem soon!
I shall now head over to author-samaβs new novel :D Byebye~
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CodeBeholder
I really don't understand what is going on with this novel, I see plenty of hype.. but the tags seem way off. She gets a system, abilities and gear right off the bat but then doesn't explore them?! She very rarely used the system and instead of doing anything of note she finds menial labor and settles down in a town!? How is this action and adventure, let alone system... And to be clear, I would be fine with any of this if we understood the characters motivations. The only time we do, is when we hear her say she doesn't want to know more about her dagger, wanting to understand it herself... which she then doesn't do.
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ProGameris
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Ying92
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phoenix_8888
I admit to liking transmigration novels a lot as well as fantasy and romance stories. As such, I tend to read the synopsis, and add them to my library to determine whether I should keep or remove.
With this novel, for some strange reason is not holding my interest. In that I'm reading but I'm not getting into the FL who I'm sure is written as an extraordinary person. The world seems okay and so far the people but as stated my interest is not invested in the story in terms of emotions. I do not feel them just an okay vibe which is not good for the library as it means a short stay.
This of course is no fault of the author per se its just that a reader's taste and interest differs. I am sure the novel is fine for others and even great for some but for me though its early yet, at this state its not going to be in my library for long. Take care author.
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ProGameris
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JUnknownC
Iβm going to write another review about this novel! To all people who are deciding whether to read this novel or not, you should read it! This novel, I rate it 10/10! This novel is interesting, unique, and fun to read! You wonβt regret reading this! :D
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JUnknownC
Iβve just started reading this novel and I have to say, this novel is awesome! Good work author! :)
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ProGameris
Iβve just started reading this, and itβs great!!! I love novels where the MC is admired and gets powerful as the story progresses and seeing Vy being admired makes me happy and proud for some reason π
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JUnknownC
This novel seems interesting so I put this in my reading list. Iβm planning on reading this novel. Iβm also doing this for exp, donβt mind me. (~^-^)~
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Ayan_Mohammed
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tellynana95
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Chang_mie
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Shakirara04
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Atria25
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Shujinko_Josei
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SAlt_iS_SWeeT
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Lonz_fonz
(Chapter 31 review) Hey! Not a writer or an editor.. be forewarned just like to read!
Nothing to complain about writing quality wise. Little to no grammar errors. Flows smoothly and if there are any errors i glossed over them.
In this novel we find ourselves following a young women by the name of Veronica black fire, who was thrust into someoneβs elseβs body w/o her memories after dying in her old world. She has a system that acts more like a guide for now and the world is a magic world. Unsure about the power scale or how the magic works really.
Main gripes the main character really just casually does things that should not be glossed over. Like she would casually use magic for her first time or eat raw flesh like it was lighting a match and drinking a cup of water. We donβt know her thought while she is doing this and really lacks depths, needs further details to keep the story less jarring. Why did she use magic?! how ?! When did she learn ?
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Meaghan_McCabe
I love this story. The characters in it and the plot. I can stop reading it and i can't wait to see how the story goes. A must read. I definitely recommend this.
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Fatima_Salgado
This is really good I really recommend you read this book on your own time cause it's so good and so addicting. I love the story plot and the characters as well. π
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