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Shadow_XYZ
Noob author blah blah blah .................................................................................................................................................
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KreiosDeimos
10/10 Would read again.
(or 5/5 I guess...)
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kingofgucci
I really like. You have to get over the first few chapters tho and then it starts to get good.I really like. You have to get over the first few chapters tho and then it starts to get good.I really like. You have to get over the first few chapters tho and then it starts to get good.
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TheZenith
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Sokanas
First the story isn't great and the character is unhinged without any clear reason or explanation as to why.
Also the premise behind that character is wrong. It is not a General, Generals are in command of an army for a nationstate or mercantile group or organisation. The MC is simply an emobaby edgelord SUPREME
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Bogg_Dann
Great fanfic, keep it up! π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯
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Devil547
It's understandable that the guy is crazy with the title of the webnovel, but madness without a reason is silly. Not my cup of tea....................
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Daoist280834
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Everything_Forever
Why add romance to a perfectly good novel that would of been fine without it!? I feel like the author just wanted some sex scenes because that will rack and more people who fap to reading this and imagining the scenes. Romance is trash and so is this novel.
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silviawtip
This is great!! I think is the first time I find a fanfic that has a mc who is merciless but also has a personality (likes girls and strength does not count)
I like that he is grounded in reality, for instance when he met his faited person, but is not praise for his intellect by every person he meets after like 5 seconds. For some reason I find it quite relaxing to red. Honestly a have read so many stupid stories due to boredom that now I have become numb to all the nonsense.
This is God send. It is a hidden gemπ that undoubtedly deserves more attention.
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Hentai_Senchou
I'm fine with him being an evil piece of sh!t and exterminating asdard over something stupid like damaging his clothes. Who knows? He's dresses like a general and they, or maybe the idea behind them, are extremely important to him. I like evil characters
What I'm not ok with is the ancient one showing up immediately after and acting like a care taker that is picking up her special ed kid that just threw a tantrum.
He changed the future on accident when talking to her and immediately after, he exterminated asgard and she never saw it coming. Yet she immediately invites him back to earth like that isn't dangerous at all. Like he can't make all of her predictions about him not hurting earth become useless with a casual action that changes the timeline.
I'm going to keep reading and will review again if I change my mind, but I won't delete this review, I will just add another one.
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Dumbgum
Hahahahahahaha The first maniac boring MC.
I rather prefer beta mc than this mc.
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AverageWannaBe
I really like this. Worked very well as a stress reliever. At first itβs just a guy walking aimlessly around and killing whoever offends him.
But as time goes on, the MC kinda develop his own goal. His character is quite simple but there are some complexities that attract me to him.
Basically an OP MC that literally donβt give a ****. Not a lot of OP MC are like this. They either get boss around by their harem or some shiet but this guy does his own thing.
Heβs also quite smart, I like the MC.
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TheDemiurge
How about going to the world of dxd and recruiting Trihexa 666 otherwise known as the apocalyptic beast with saitama and killing the arrogant idiots there and spoil the story plot ππππ
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TheDemiurge
How about sending him to the Bleach Anime since he thinks that he is missing a part of soul or something. The fight between him and the soul reapers will be AWESOMEEEE.....
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TheDemiurge
A great Fanfic which i really love to read. It would be better if the author can fix updating rate of the novel. And add some new twist and turns
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creatorGod
This is good Novel,
MC with system but He can Accept or Decline Quest so... he is not a Slave of system.mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmomoomoooooooooooom
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Sheyan
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Gutterstomp
The grammar is readable but includes many many mistakes here and there through out the story(if I can even call this a story) only a couple of thousands of word into the fanfic, the author thought it was a good idea to just wipe out the asgardians, no character development no world building no nothing, just because they damaged his clothes a tiny bit. The Mc is now locked into a battle with pretty much all the main characters in the marvel cinematics. Iβm baffled at how quickly this story is progressing and doubt that it would go over 30 chapters at this point.
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wisdomkeeper
This is good Novel,
MC with system but He can Accept or Decline Quest so... he is not a Slave of system.
5 stars βββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ
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amaturewriter
OP MC...selfish..does whatever he wants..dope..interested....keep MC stupid OP...I physically he already is in the top [right?]...make MC travel to anime or wuxia worlds...preferably a few years before cannon..add some romance and fluff but pls build it...keep MC smart and strong..not some perverted idiot.......well.....goodluck....
**: maybe make MC free hela and travel with her...not black widow cause she is overdone
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