This is great bro the comedy and drama and action is the best. i hope that you start this back up again, its already been a year man please come back!!
Honestly it might be one of the worst AOT fan fics i have ever read. The MC is bad written, the harem is horrible, the addition of magic and shit to OG characters is horendous and the fact that harem is accepted in a CIVILIZED SOCIETY like it is a normal thing is just plain stupid. This is my honest review so if you remove just because you can not bare what i said then go ahead i won't stop you.
Although long, but still a good start. It can be seen that the author worked on the story of the main character, which is good. The author began, joking in places, at first it was funny. But gradually, these author's jokes, which were all just like the author's thoughts, began to affect the entire book. For me personally, this is a strange decision and somewhat spoils the impression of the book. As a fan fiction for the evening, it looks good. The story of the main character and the initial chapters when he got into the world of AoT led me astray.
I began to believe that I had finally found a serious fanfiction where the author does not write for the sake of freaking stones and he is not a sloth.
Well, you understand, the sudden appearance of comedy has cooled my ardor for fan fiction and most likely, I will not return here again.
But still, I would like to thank the author for his work. Thank you for respecting your readers and not behaving like some individuals who consider themselves the navel of the earth (GhostyZ) and give out 500 characters as a chapter. Thanks!
For the long chapters, Respect, although I am a little disappointed, but in general I was satisfied with what I read. Bye and good luck to everyone
Hmmm ,mc is not from modern world so he doesn't know the plot and the world he in. .. .. .. .. ..not a good novel. .. .. .. Why you not make him as a modern reincarnation .. .. .. Not from fantasy world .. .. .. .. So this is not fun. ..
19 chapters and the story barely reaches canon. Romance is with other people just coincidentally named mikasa, christa, and anny. It’s disappointing and makes no sense mc is so op to the point he could and has distroy a universe but, he can’t think ahead or move fast when it is needed. At first U either out right quit or don’t take it seriously. Mc is op to a crazy level so u can forget plot other the Romance but, thats wrong. No matter your approach on the story it will always be trash. Stupid story all around and besides its droped. Author seems to be Young likely in high school so don’t expect much.
This is a story about MC tormenting Eren and Armin and doing cringe romance with Mikasa Armin and Historia
That's about it... nothing more, really, that's just it.
The April Fools day chapters went too far. I never thought I would actually dislike an author as I do now. It’s a good story though, there’s not a lot of AOT fanfics out there.
Je n'ai pas vu tout le manga, mais si la partie où le cœur de mikasa-tan se brise, j'ai arrêté de le voir, je n'aime pas le personnage de "Eren", pire avec sa façon de se comporter.
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Mikasa-chan, annie et Krista, sont de bons candidats pour le harem, car ils ont tous des histoires tristes ou de lourdes charges.
Вообще крутой фанфик конечно. Проработаный сюжет, хороший юмор, романтика. Больше всего мне нравится гарем. Он тут просто идеальный. И конечно же троллинг главного героя. Это осень смешно, все его шутки смешные. Шутки в этом фанфике самое главное. Больше троллинга богу троллинга.
Story is pretty meh. Was hoping it would be better. Pretty much story line crap with not much difference and the MC was pretty much a god but still worthless... constant swapping povs
This is the second fanfic novel I've read, your novel is brilliant, but anything short of fulfilling an action or conduct event. That's all I got. Otherwise it's all good.
NeaCambelt