Reviews of The Last Slytherin by Snowstar - Webnovel

Hello, This is Snowstar. Author of this novel. There a few things that I would like to say about the novel that readers must know. Those who don't like to know even a tiny bit of spoiler, Ignore this and proceed. As for those who want to know what this is about, Please continue. 1. The protagonist of the novel, Neal Slytherin is the direct descendant of Salazar Slytherin and not a descendant from the House of Gaunt like Voldemort. 2. Neal won't be too cold or arrogant like how everyone expects Slytherin to be. He might act friendlier towards strangers because he was taught to do like that from his Orphanage where he grew up. But that's it. 3. Neal won't be like a hero who forgives anyone or helps others. He's a Grey MC. Please don't judge him at the starting chapters. 4. Neal won't involve much in Harry's events and have his own story. So, aside from interaction from time to time, they don't be involved much in each other stories. 5. While the overall plot doesn't change, the story between start and end might be the same or different. 6. The progress of MC training the spells can't be shown as it's a bit boring process for me to write as well as take too much space and time to research about it. So, please don't think how did MC knows such strong spells or something like that. After all, this is not some jutsu or sword technique training that needs to take a lot of time. All it needs his comprehension. MC is being portraited as the most talented student and often gets compared to Voldemort indirectly from time to time. Although he still might need a lot of training when it comes to real battles. 7. History sometimes will be changed from the original to my comfort for the story. So, please don't point out that it is wrong and it isn't that way on the books or movies 8. And finally, the most important point in fanfic that everyone curious about. Is this a Harem or not? The answer is "NO". MC will end up with only one person. As for who it is, it will remain as a question mark until the end of the novel. Please do comment, Add to Library and Vote power stones to support me, if you like the novel.

Very good story as the mc doesn't care much about the golden trio, acts like pureblood (not in the bad way), the author has changed some things about the og story making this truly interesting as it does not follow the og story and the story progresses quite fast so it doesn't get boring. Some minor writing errors, but very much readable. Very strongly recommended!

It is definitely a very good read. I've fully read 25 hp fanfics and dropped around 60 this is my third favorite of all of them.

Dropped???

.....yeahh just like thaht and leve it here

This is one of the best fan fiction of Harry Potter ever. I really recommend it. Please update more author, this book has so much potential.

Quite intriguing how Oakley Avery saw Tom Riddle aka Voldemort beneath him because of his status as a half blood wonder what will happen next especially after Harry I'm assuming starts to mention of Voldemort being back like the dumb child that he is so to speak not thinking of the foolishness of the situation not to mention what will happen now with Neal back at Hogwarts and if he will end up accepting or changing due to his darkness either way cant wait to read more of this book look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on

1/ This fanfic is mostly based on the movies rather than the books. 2/The author has superficial knowledge about the wizarding world. 3/ The characters were very 2 dimensional, with no depth. This story has potential😊

Quite intriguing and curious how Harry is reflecting back on how he could have had a better relationship with Neal not to mention if he had made the right choice in letting Ron and his family along with what he heard of Voldemort and then Malfoy influence him a little too much that he believed everyone from Slytherin to be dark and bad and now he is regretting it especially when he knows he has a darkness inside of him and how the sorting hat wanted to put him in Slytherin wonder what will happen next when they return to Hogwarts look forward to reading more of this book and getting the chance for when ur able to continue on with this book cant wait to read more

Quite intriguing where Neal and Harry appeared at not to mention wonder what will happen when Dumbledore goes to the Gaunts house as well also what did he mean by Neal's secrets to Snape look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book

En serio me fascinó la historia de este MC, de como se integra al mundo mágico y de este influye a su descendencia, pero algo que no me gustó fue el hecho que no se da mucho potencial a otros personajes secundarios en el entorno que rodea al Mc, pero de todas formas es muy genial la historia autor-san 😎👊

This is a very good story as of chapter 92. I love how the MC doesn't know the plot, doesn't really have a golden finger come out of nowhere, and truly feels that in an AU of Harry Potter he can actually exist. He also doesn't try to become the KING of everything and only goes on to excel in the things that actually interest him. He also doesn't become a tail for the trio and they only cross paths because of his family history and his friends clashing with them. As for his changing cannon, it is natural since he is a Slytherin and he wants to know his heritage, and since Voldy was also a Slytherin the MCs actions change what Harry experiences on his way to defeat Voldy.

Quite intriguing what happened when Voldemort went up against Neal not to mention how he had mocked him got him quite mad wonder what will happen next especially after Dumbledore received the letter from Neal wonder what will happen next

The title and description along with the OC of how powerful and cunning not to mention intelligent and can be resourceful in how he acquires stuff and ask for favors like what he did with Hagrid or more so the deals with both Snape and Moody aka Barty Crouch Jr. And how he does safety measures even was the one who put his name in the Goblet of Fire not to mention was interested and intrigued even more when reading the chapter of Newton Scamander's suitcase as well how the OC was able to capture the Basilisk among other creatures including Buck the Giant Snake also like how he has a pet snake that he took with him as well also can transform into a 25 ft long Snake look forward to reading more especially of this battle between Voldemort vs The Heir Of Slytherin look forward to reading more of this book and finding out what will happen next especially after this last chapter wonder what the OC wants to say and what will happen next either way cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book would love to read more overall enjoyed reading ur book and hope to read more of it

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Honestly after reading up to Chapter 86 i find this to be rather lack luster there does not feel to be any death with certain important characters especially eve who it seemed the author completely forgot about for what seemed like 40 chapters until it was convienent

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I hope there will be new chapters soon. It was a great beginning, the characters are good developed and the universe is respected. I'm waiting for any updates from the author. An encouragement from France

will you continue this story or is it dropped ? cause i like this story and i want to read more of it please continue writing this story or at least say of it is dropped

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The writing is bad, like distractingly so. It is an interesting concept, but after muscling through the bad grammar and constantly changing tense (past tense / present tense) I find that you have more of an outline of a story than anything. Good concept, but if you're not able to write English than use Grammarly or something.

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I like it very much. Read it till 80 chapter in one go. Very interesting. Good work by the author. Yeah.... it has some little bit moments where you find that story shouldn't have gone like this, but overall it kept the interest ongoing.

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I really liked it.