Reviews of Transported In Another World As A LoL Summoner by Moe_Cyan_Pile - Webnovel

Ive read the first few chapters, and the story is great, but i fell like i know too much ybout the lore of LOL to enjoy this novel, especially bringing in a girl called Misha, is like inviting trouble, especially when Aatrox or Zoe ever apear in that story, or the thing with Shyvanna, i understand that the story changes a few things, but turning a half dragon in a beautiful lady seems kinda off, especially regarding the amount of realism Yummi, Rek'sai and Garen got. And its already kinda setting bad flags incase Lux should ever become part of the story

In the beginning of the story the mc starts off outside a town called ruric and like a week later two siblings become adventures so then the mc babysits them during the rest of volume 1, volume 2 the mc got a request to help train the dukes daughter cause she couldn't control her magic so when the mc goes there the daughter doesn't even come out of her for at least 2/3 days later on in volume 2 there was a mini army of wolves that the mc knew about but didn't tell the Duke cause he wanted the exp which resulted in all his summons dieing temporarily and him being hurt and then they regard him as a hero just cause he fought them instead of being reprimanded for being reckless and volume 3 is the reason I dropped the story because the author introduced a female reincarnated person which turns out the world he is in is a time game and then he finds out there's over 1200 other reincarnaters other than him a chunnibuyo wannabe hero and a otome game mc which is the reason I dropped it

Your style is different from the novels I read since it doesn't have a lot of prose. The writing style you have is not bad and is actually it is easy to understand. It is good and easy to read, and the flow of the story is good also. I probably got used to reading old fashioned novels or format but it does not matter. There is a lot of reference too that I can relate, especially in the first few chapters. It really did crack a smile on my face and is really entertaining. My verdict for the story is 4.6/5.0. I noticed some minor mistakes in capitalization and spelling but proofreading and some edits can fix them. It's a good story in overall and please do not give up writing. I find it a good read and entertaining at the same time. Thank you for reading this review! The TradeMaker