Reviews of I transmigrated to a mafia character from a BL Dark novel!

Hello here is the author! Title of the novel: I reincarnated as an insignificant side character from a Dark BL Novel. Genre: BL, Romance, Dark, Smut, Mystery, Harem, and Adventure. Ideal age: R-18 Content: Love relationship between men, sexual relationship, demons, angels, elves, priests and gods. Number of Chapters: Undefined This is my first BL harem, so bear with me. Any resemblance to real-life facts is purely coincidental. I hope you all like it, I don't know how everyone will react, so I can't say if the novel will progress as I would like it to go. Thank you for reading the novel and for reading this presentation review.

There are very few novels where the MC is gong. And I love stories like this wildly. I also liked this novel very much. Oh, I wish I could find such a lot of novels.💜💜

ok. review. maybe it just me. honestly, i have to skim some of the chapters caz the writing ain't communicating that well with me. it's not bad. after completing the story, if plan to edit, i think the writing could be great. normally, i would have dropped it caz i can't feel the flow with the writing. but i didn't as i love this story. i love how it goes. so i ignore what i didn't like and keep going for the story sake. 😅 and boy, i'm glad i did. i mean, for some reasons, nsfw writings are much better. i can actually imagine both mc and ml with a much better flow. it didn't make me feel like a block like the chapters i had read for this one before. the writing has progressed. i love it. the story is great.

I thought it would be more dark/ gorey ect.. Don’t get me wrong it has some r@pe,blood, smut , ect but this book didn’t me down ! Give this book a try it’s really good 😌! I don’t know who I should ship who with anymore but it’s fine can’t wait to see go on. Hope you stay well and don’t stress out to much to give us a chapter author!☺️

Well, interesting. The world building are good. The character are unique and have distinctive personality. For now I am still on early chapters so I can't say more. But here is 5* from me.

Such a good novel! I couldn't stop reading it! Can't wait to see how the story and relationships develop from here! The relationships are hot🔥 the plot intricate, and just an overall amazing story! I can't wait to read more! Read with me and discover one of my favorite authors!

I have been following this novel for a very long time and I can confidently say that it is better than what I have read.interesting and intriguing plot, cool characters.so I can safely say that this novel is worth reading.

I personally like mc being the bottom... That aside, this is a great story! it's not that dark, there are fluffs, the plot is interesting and the harem. I'm really looking forward for the updates!

I love this book! Please update more chapters I want more! the characters are amazing and so is the sex scene. I hope to see more of the demon and angel sex scenes.

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The story has an interesting plot and the characters so far have been unique. The main issue I have is how the author writes. There's too much explaing of tiny insignificant details and not enough explaining of what the characters are doing. An example would be let's say the main character walking down a hallway and then looks outside a window which would led into a detailed explanation of the architecture of the building. You get what I mean. I as a reader isn't interested in that I would rather know whats going to happen when the mc get to his destination. My advice is to focus on one topic while sprinkling some SIGNIFICANT details that is useful and or will come up later. Besides this I think the story has potentially and will be waiting for more chapters😗.

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I personally give the novel 4 stars. ⭐⭐⭐⭐ But the actual story is only at it's prologue stage. Thus, with so few chapters, the actual rating is not relevant. But the synopsis of the novel reveal a hidden gem. It let the reader hope for a 200+ chapter story. So for me, the story development is at 1%. I wish all the best for Lord Author: "Please do not think that I dislike your work, it is just that the rating is not complete. Do not abandon this wonderful unpolished novel!" This novel really makes you wish for more!

It's a great book so far with the limited amount of chapters that they have release so far and I'm really hoping that they don't stop I hate to see good stories ending because they didn't have enough support so support our peeps here but just make sure that you guys don't over work your self making them chapters boys lol

Enjoying it so far. Can’t really tell where things are going right now as it’s too soon to tell with this story development at this stage. Hoping the following chapters continue to hold my attention!

This novel has a pretty interesting Idea, starting with the MC reincarnating in as a side character, the world he comes into is really unique although a bit gruesome. The pacing is odd at first, it takes a few chapters of worldbuilding before we actually start to see the MC story, but after that it' has nice pacing, not rushing and always explaining important details of the world. Overall is a really nice story and I'm looking forward to where it is going to end up in.

It isn't a dark BL like I was expecting and so far the concept is pretty interesting. I think instead of having it as reincarnated as an insignificant side character from a dark BL novel a more fitting title would be "Trying to survive in a western fantasy BL novel". The dark part usually will scare people away(and the people expecting a really dark story will be disappointed), and it's transmigration not reincarnation. Transmigration is when a soul takes over an already existing persons body, reincarnation is starting out as a baby. Besides a couple grammar mistakes here and there the story is pretty good.

No offense, but I hate BL. Especially, darker ones. So I'm going to talk about the grammar. Well, I didn't noticed any typos or anything, I'm blind If there was. Story Development is nice, It's going into a nice pace. Write what you want, and keep up the good work!