Reviews of I transmigrated to a mafia character from a BL Dark novel! by Take_the_Moon - Webnovel

Hello here is the author! Title of the novel: I reincarnated as an insignificant side character from a Dark BL Novel. Genre: BL, Romance, Dark, Smut, Mystery, Harem, and Adventure. Ideal age: R-18 Content: Love relationship between men, sexual relationship, demons, angels, elves, priests and gods. Number of Chapters: Undefined This is my first BL harem, so bear with me. Any resemblance to real-life facts is purely coincidental. I hope you all like it, I don't know how everyone will react, so I can't say if the novel will progress as I would like it to go. Thank you for reading the novel and for reading this presentation review.

I got to chapter 13 so far. If this got rewritten (and edited) then some chapters and details could be completely deleted. The characters are the only interesting thing, but the random trains of thought take away from the story. I know its the author’s way of building the world, but the info could be worked into the plot better.

the updates are very slow but the story is amazing that i can't stop reading and re-reading", thank you, author-nim", 😊😊

The idea for the story is fun and interesting and I really wanted to enjoy it but every time I start to get interested there is pages of descriptions about stuff I don't care about and that are completely uneccessary. Please think about what you would want to read, would you take the time to read three pages about architecture? Details should mostly be peppered in carefully and only when neccessary. The best way is if two people are talking. Worldbuilding is important but extra details like the design of each floor of the building are just not needed.

I find this story very original and addicting. It’s one of the best stories I’ve read in a long time and what got me into this app.

well, what can I say. it's good, a decent piece of work on such genre in this platform. the only thing we need is updates, updates people, updates.

terrible grammar. the novel is hard to understand its like reading a machine translated version of a novel😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

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I really liked the novel( suddenly bunch of characters appeared ) but other than that, I have nothing to say than... TAKE MY MONEY! Really hoping for more chapter (just a small review from fan of Azarphy >_<)

the story is awesome for me, but I just got spoiled when I read the author's other novel. there was this certain chapter that mention our dear Emery and what happened to him.wuwuwu! I hope its not the real end of this novel with that tragic end. that #tragic tag is giving me ominous feeling. I thought it was just for the back stories of the characters but my BE alarm is wailing!

I like this story very much, can't stop reading. The story is great but I would rate the writing as 4 star, it's because sometimes the description is too long and it made me a little bored, I suggest the author to make it a little shorter. But other than that this book is great and I recommend it to the readers.

aside from the problems of the word 'mc' being repeated over and over in the beginning chapters there's not much problems , it gets a bit annoying sometimes especially for a reader to read a word like every 2 or 3 sentences.Based on what I've read so far the plot is great the protagonist is a bit dumb wanting to live a peaceful life and not incurring the 'mc' wrath but planned to meddle in his situation with the church helping him gain his freedom yada yada which in turn gave attention to him making him not able to escape from the 'mc' as he wanted, which is pretty stupid tbh .

I'm curious how this story will go with next chapters. I quite like it so far. It's slightly different from what i usually read but i kind of like personality of that fallen angel (usual image: i love all beings, image in this story: whatever!).

Harem novel...story about virgin who made contract with angel, demon, god and spirit...novel with lot of passion...and dark topics 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

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I really enjoyed this book until its last page. I had read all 80 current chartists within the last two days it was that engrossing lol. The only downside is that it ran out of released chapters.

Honestly when I first added this I didn't know what to expect but in the UNGODLY hours of the night I decided to read it yk see what it's about. Face it head on😂 but as I read it I fell in love with this book. It's not your typical book and I love that. I wish the best to the author and hope that they will still update😁

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Very very very good . Gong = MC I like it .🥰🥰🥰😍😍ksnsjzkksjsjsjsksksksjsjjssjsjsksksksjjsjskzkzksnsnsjsksn28dujxsi92j1hshd891iwjdu8d8wk2jxic891okwjd8e9o2jehduc0101odhdu37190wijh79sokhy7ikjuiwokkjuiooiu

ok. review. maybe it just me. honestly, i have to skim some of the chapters caz the writing ain't communicating that well with me. it's not bad. after completing the story, if plan to edit, i think the writing could be great. normally, i would have dropped it caz i can't feel the flow with the writing. but i didn't as i love this story. i love how it goes. so i ignore what i didn't like and keep going for the story sake. 😅 and boy, i'm glad i did. i mean, for some reasons, nsfw writings are much better. i can actually imagine both mc and ml with a much better flow. it didn't make me feel like a block like the chapters i had read for this one before. the writing has progressed. i love it. the story is great.

I thought it would be more dark/ gorey ect.. Don’t get me wrong it has some r@pe,blood, smut , ect but this book didn’t me down ! Give this book a try it’s really good 😌! I don’t know who I should ship who with anymore but it’s fine can’t wait to see go on. Hope you stay well and don’t stress out to much to give us a chapter author!☺️

Well, interesting. The world building are good. The character are unique and have distinctive personality. For now I am still on early chapters so I can't say more. But here is 5* from me.

Such a good novel! I couldn't stop reading it! Can't wait to see how the story and relationships develop from here! The relationships are hot🔥 the plot intricate, and just an overall amazing story! I can't wait to read more! Read with me and discover one of my favorite authors!

I have been following this novel for a very long time and I can confidently say that it is better than what I have read.interesting and intriguing plot, cool characters.so I can safely say that this novel is worth reading.

I personally like mc being the bottom... That aside, this is a great story! it's not that dark, there are fluffs, the plot is interesting and the harem. I'm really looking forward for the updates!

I love this book! Please update more chapters I want more! the characters are amazing and so is the sex scene. I hope to see more of the demon and angel sex scenes.

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The story has an interesting plot and the characters so far have been unique. The main issue I have is how the author writes. There's too much explaing of tiny insignificant details and not enough explaining of what the characters are doing. An example would be let's say the main character walking down a hallway and then looks outside a window which would led into a detailed explanation of the architecture of the building. You get what I mean. I as a reader isn't interested in that I would rather know whats going to happen when the mc get to his destination. My advice is to focus on one topic while sprinkling some SIGNIFICANT details that is useful and or will come up later. Besides this I think the story has potentially and will be waiting for more chapters😗.