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Kenlinvert1
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amaturewriter
Low rating only because this **** isnt in FF......put it in FF damn it....how the hell are people supposed to find this ****............. **: just saying when you put it in FF could ya maybe re-write it...ex: instead of sharingan some other ability like bankai....aizen and yamamoto and all hollow?..why cause sharingan as amazing and cool as it is...its kinda over done....or give him sharingan and bankai..................also for harem add ultear.....save her...MC could meet her first............dont make harem gigantic...build the romance....no separation.......GL
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Kanzaki_Io
it is good but its short it is good but its short it is good but its short it is good but its short it is good but its short it is good but its short it is good but its short it is good but its short it is good but its short it is good but its short it is good but its short it is good but its short it is good but its short it is good but its short it is good but its short it is good but its short it is good but its short
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Dust_In_R
This is an all together great story and i love the character development. I can hardly wait for the next update. I think this is one of the best stories i have read in a long time.
10mth
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Supreme_Devil
(😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛) For absolutely no reason, don't judge me, I'm just a lunatic passing by.
10mth
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jeanpierregerardo
good start, first I saw your fanfic coincidence yesterday, I ignored it because I thought it was one of those things that do not attract attention, but today, as I walked with nothing to read, I clicked to distract myself, well what can I say, I I like the beginning the personality. ------------------------ I hope you don't drop it like others, keep it up, I wish I had appeared before, where irene the dragon queen began, but what can I say, so far everything ok. ------------------------ in other fanfic he also gives an opinion of, if he had gone first to the places where they were natsu for the 100 year mission or was 1000 years. and with respect to the harem, take all those who presented the anime, including the princess. that is all. ----------------------------------------------------- and change that image, for another to get attention, put a "fairy tail".
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