Reviews of The Mysterious Black Magician by Fhrutz_D_Hollow - Webnovel

HI, Author here! Shamelessly reviewing his work. Of course, I rated it for 5. But if you have free time and nothing to do, try to peek and read in this novel. Maybe what you’re looking for is here. The greatness of this novel cannot be found in the early chapter. Every character in this novel is 4d😉. So try and see. Then don’t forget to leave a review. And if you are more than generous, I will be happy and be more motivated if you can drop some power stone or send coffee gifts. I leave it here if you wanted to rant at me: Discord: @CloudSky#4375 BIG THANKS FOR READING!!

This story is a good read to try out. It starts off slow then it gets better at somehwere around ch.40. Most reviews are on grammar, all i say is come on humans arent perfect. Most reviews are also from those who stop at the first 10 chapters and havent read the whole novel. Give it a try If your have nothing to read.

The story starts off slow but really started to pick up to a good pace if you make through the beginning. the more the story progresses id have to say everything gets a lot better the mc is developing at a good pace the world background is solid and the author does a great job at makIng you want more. great job author keep up the good Work

Don’t waste your time reading this author’s books as he never completes them and drops them whenever he thinks the views have dropped. If you don’t believe me check his profile.

writing quality is most important in the beginning its not something you should only fix in later chapters you need to fix your early mistakes when you get better 1/5 stars.story development is slow based on the synopsis alone if I need to read 20 paid chapters deep then you failed as a writer as I won't feel guilty about not paying for something I don't know I'm missing, you need to make the story interesting within the free chapters if you don't your only readers are people who have enough money to waste on potentially boring chapters but its potentially good for those people with money to waste unfortunately I am not one of those people 1/5 stars.character development has to be good to make a story people actually like with a beginning like that so I will give the benefit of the doubt that the positive reviews aren't bots or idiots but still you can't use character development if the beginning makes me feel like reading this is a waste of my time 4/5 stars.updating stability must be ok if nobody is complaining but that doesn't matter if new readers don't make it to the latest chapter 3/5 stars.world background isn't the very first thing in the story and it is unreadable to me 1/5 stars.I made this review because the author says to read all the way into a paid chapter but I don't have the patience nor money for that.

finally, keep writing this story it has potential . I thought I was going to go mad not knowing if this was going to be another incomplete story with no ending... seriously keep it up though, there is nothing worse then an incomplete story especially when I know you can write a good story [img=recommend][img=recommend]

The novel is poorly translated. The MC is pathetic and constantly bullied with no courage. Even his system makes fun of him. The world background and concepts are pretty boring. Who knows if the story changes directions in the future, I dropped it by chapter 30.

I love this it's a really good read no complaints with the story here it has a great story and pretty good characters the MC isn't this experienced battle hardened chunky always looking for a fight to power up so he does make mistakes is a lil selfish and I don't mind I'm just concerned if there is going to be new chapter updates or this book will be sadly forgotten never finished

I really would like for the mysterious black magician to get completed, it started off slow but got a little bit better I believe if the author continues to develop the story it will start to improve their skills . I just hope this isn't another story that gets abandoned and stays incomplete .

overall it is an amazing novel one of the best I have read. the story starts slow but eventually get better at 40 th chapter . A must read in fantasy and mmorpg genre.

I only read the first 30 or so chapters. Nothing about the MC is likeable. He is weak AF, he is dumb AF. Author seems to be kinda forcing a character development, forcing a romance from the start? Dunno, I guess this just isn't my cup of tea.

Not much to say, just not my cup of tea. Has a good premise l, but the character themselves are not enjoyable for me. Wished they were fleshed out a bit more and the beginning of the novel was very confusing and a lot seemed overly forced. Some of the relationships I could understand but others, like the system with mc, just rushed in too fast. So overall, biggest complaint is how quick character development happens. Didn't think I'd say that.

Okay hm so eh the system is really annoying and eh there’s multiples grammar mistakes and eh he’s really dumb and everyone’s dumb so that’s fair

Not really sure why this has a high rating. I read the first 3 chapters and decided I was good. It needs editing as many things so not make grammatical sense. In addition the overview was summarized to the point of being worthless. If the world was destroyed by meteors how were they able to do research? There’a only’s 20% of the population that survived the first 2 “calamities”. Easy Pass for me.

Okay so I don’t usually do reviews but here it goes The English is rough at first and the author uses some phrases wrong but overall I’m enjoying the story I’m on chapter 33 and the English is showing improvements The author leaves a few things unexplained but so far most of my questions have been answered The only complaint I have is that the main characters development doesn’t make sense all the time Lastly it’s a pretty good read so far so stick it out to chapter 30 and see if it’s for you

I have been reading for a while now and its a really great story! Very interesting! This is the very first story that quite honestly has my full attention!

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good start and nice different approach with the systhem but the storry is full of holes and mistakes initself. author maybe reread your own storry

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The novel is good with nice elements....but sometimes the author forgets about his plots that he has made in the past and makes something new...its just confusing once you noticed it. Also i don't know if it was on purpose or not but the spelling of some words are also wrong.

If someone needs to read 100 chapters to START enjoying your story thats a bad sign.

The best story I've come across so far❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😘😘😘😘😘the story development is superb,I'm in love with Yman aka crimson❤️ just want more and more of the story

good starter novel for rookie reader that haven't read this kind of genre. other than that, it's painful to read. the story use bad cliche part from KR and CN novel. i can't even pass reading early chapters, so there's no way I'm gonna force myself until ch100+. this novel has potential, i just hope for author to rewrote the novel.

The most shameless descriptions I have ever seen and that is the sole reason I'm giving it a five star review. (fyi the cover picture is from a manga I read called Legend of Asura - The Venom Dragon)

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so im gunna say this story has a rough start first 40 chapters are basically used as building blocks so it is really slow after that it starts to pick up some Grammer and the way some things are said or described are a little annoying however this does not effect the quality of the story its very good if you can get through to 50 chapters at the least if you are gunna give it a try

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Please move this novel to Magical realism section if it is an urban fantasy. Please move this novel to Magical realism section if it is an urban fantasy