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This is incredibly well written and I'm shocked that this story went unnoticed for such a long time. The chapters are very long, making up for the story's apparent shortness. The plot seems promising. This fanfiction has a great potential.
I'm just worried about the stability of updates, since the last one was three months ago.
Seems good.
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Ta bom de mais, a escrita ta perfeita, o desenvolvimento do personagem esta legal, e o entendimento da linguá ta bom, e para o harém, eu poderia sugerir a Fleur, Tonks, Rose Potter, Hermione, a filha de Sirius, acho que e Bianca, e mais algum que você ache interessante.
Really enjoying this book so far. Only real complaint I have is MC is to angsty in my opinion. He does seem to be getting a bit better as the book goes on so here’s hoping. Keep up the excellent work
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Wow. Really good chapter.
And really good story so far.
The main character is good and awesome.
The world building is great.
And the updates are consistent.
Please update more.
Excellent fanfiction.i love to see more chapter s released.thank you author for such a wonderful novel. Hope you don't drop it and All the best !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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For Harem: Fleur and Gabrielle Delacour, Rose Potter, Bianca Black, Hermione Granger, Daphne and Astoria Greengrass, Luna Lovegood, Susan Bones, Nymphadora Tonks, Patel Twins, Penelope Clearwater and the Quidditch trio. Looking forward to the next chapters.
The story is looking good.
The chapter was good.
And the story is also good.
And it is progressing.
Good to see updates are consistent.
Please update more.
Really good chapter.
And Really good story.
I am really liking the story.
The world building is great.
And the main character is also great.
Please update more.
Cool chapter. Great story.
Please update more.Cool chapter. Great story.
Please update more.Cool chapter. Great story.
Please update more.
Cool chapter. Great story.
Please update more.Cool chapter. Great story.
Please update more.Cool chapter. Great story.
Please update more.
The storytelling is just astounding. Events happen in a logical way, characters reaction to those events are logical based on their own characteristics. The chapters are longer than the usual here so the narrative will get you hooked in no time, that is if you like au harry potter
So Far it is very well written with a long intro. The AU elements make this interesting a caught my attention once they started. The only thing I don't like is the Hermione bashing. But it is small and easy to move past. Keep up the good work.
JBrissos