this is a great story with a very good writting quality , and the prologue was a novel on its own. you have to read it yourself to know how great this is and one of the good finished stories in wn.
Buena historia, todo muy trabajado e interesante. MC inteligente, fuerte y realista.
Lo ΓΊnico que podrΓa haber mejorado serΓa la evoluciΓ³n de los personajes, me parece que el carΓ‘cter de algunos se han quedado igual a lo largo de la historia, sin ningΓΊn crecimiento psicolΓ³gico.
Pero en general ha sido muy buena historia π
The MCbgot nerfed really hard. In the OC world he was supposed to be a genius where everything bores him. He was a perfect assassin who never made mistakes. But now in the akame world he does stupid things like talk before fighting, goes easy on opponents seeing that they are weaker than and plays with him, can't use his brain enough to get what he wants and he talks too sweet for my liking. His intelligence is nerfed. He forgot the most important things that his wife in the OC world taught him.
well i personally hate romance and harem the harem is kinda subtle but literally ALL his companions are women and girls till chapter fourth of course many of them want him so if you are not into Harem and Romance i will not suggest getting into reading this novel
I read this novel as it was being written and it was great. I see it every now and then since I keep good novels I completed in my library. I have been on web novel almost 3 years and this is the only complete fanfic have read and enjoyed. Fanfiction on web novel sucks but this is one of the good ones.
I Need more but it a really good story
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I like him but it's a shame I think that Akashi's women are too few even though he has a lot of good relationships with women πΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏπΏ
Everything was great from the intro that was 20 chapters I think. Been awhile since I read that part. To him being in the akame world was a journey. One of the best fanfics Iβve read. Good romance which doesnβt ruin the story. He ends up with max two women. Just to give an idea. Since some people care so much.
I had read this story five times in the course of when it was still unfinished. I had re-read it thrice when it got completed.
The whole story got carried out decently, assimilating the character into the story's lore. It was also one of the best Akame Ga Kill fanfic out there.
The prologue was a tad unrealistic but was quite good as well. The pace was somewhat slow but gave it justice in many parts of the story. Interesting character development. I'll give the author that.
However, there were more flaws than merits.
There were too many grammatical errors, especially in prepositions and word choice, Dialogue tags got improperly utilized, and the vocabulary was too limited. There were many times wherein I couldn't immerse myself in a particular scene or fight.
The bloody and ruthless atmosphere of the lore, which was what Akame Ga Kill is known for, was lackluster. The romance part of the story heavily influenced it, making it subpar. The story's development was lacking too, and it was easy to get disconnected from the characters. Such was the case with the MC, as his character development became disjointed in the middle part of the story. The original characters' (in Akame ga Kill) personalities were not consistent with their base personality (in the original work).
Nevertheless, this story is a good read. I highly recommend this story for casual readers and not so much for critical readers. If you can ignore the typos and plotholes, this is for you.
P.S. I get it that the author is substandard, but they must have improved, no? It has been a year since the story's completion. A revision is now up for the stands, even if it is only fanfic.
This story was absolutely amazing. Not even talking about the godlike prolog. the character development and the overall pacing of the mc is great love this book
This is to not take Ichika and Aikoβ¦β¦.......................................................................,..........................,..............................................................................................
Very great and nice fanfic. The mc is OP and ruthless and has really a good reason for his character. I even enjoyed the prologue. The system is not broken and it mainly monitors his progress. I also like the romance going on with the mc. I like the pairings and it does not feel like forced. The ending is also very satisfying with him getting the happiness he deserve. Overall great story and fanfic. Thank you for this story author.π₯³π₯³π₯³
The story was interesting and we got to see the past of the protagonist which explains a lot about the protagonist's character and his decicions during the story.
Re-read it once again after 1 Year. Still the best completed fanfiction I have ever read.
Mc's characterization, Character interactions, Plot premise and plot progression are excellent.
Hope author writes few more fanfics.
I read this. this is a good book with an interesting plot and a good ending. amazing action, character development.I can say that the author did an excellent job!
After suffering through the bad grammar and understanding, I have decided to abandon this fic at chapter 83. The amount of information placed into this fic is inconsistent and it lacks a concept, therefore I have decided to abandon it.
However, this tale has an incredible opening, as well as a world-building that's also imaginative, powerful, and passionate. One of the finest I've ever read.
In my experience, if your character is significant enough to have a name, they are also significant enough to have a purpose. As far as I can tell from what I've read so far, Akashi's character development is purely for narrative purposes; Akashi has a basic goal, which is to live an easy and pleasant existence.
The way you conclude your tale will be remembered by readers for the longest time.
I have a lot of thoughts, but for the time being, this is all I have to conclude.
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