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Rillakuma_Rila
Hey author san can you pls continue this its good though its a hidden gem
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sunnybala
I don't know why did you stop this fiction even though you are active in site it a really good story. There are hardly any original plots nowadays Please continue if u can
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The_Bored_Immortal
Sigh... unfortunately author abandoned this fanfic a year ago it truly had a lot of potential. Now I am just sad. I meant if you want read it, it's very entertaining for those 11 chapters.
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Felicia_Summer357
This book! I just have to say it is amazing! I love the name that he has cosen for himself. The story line is great! I would love to read more! So please keep on writeing!
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Descentofpotential
You ever gonna finish this it's been like 3 months. Or should I just unpin, its very by the way good?
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alesjandritos
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Eric_Wilhelm
Good story bro, I love the how you slowly built up his background, Survival, how he got his Devil Fruit, Master, Training. You went all out so far and I hope you keep it this way (don't like how most fanfics mc's either follow luffy&crew or take's some of his crew members (nami or robin) come on there's a lot of hot&sexy female potential crew members out there other then those 2 (never liked nami) but her sister different story. [Sorry got side tracked] But over all love story man keep the chapters coming. Very good read!
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Precheur
It could have been nice, but the world building is ****ty with the good vs bad, it leave a bad taste, all character are 1d either completly good or otherwise.
And i suspect author is american since he has this : i will bring you peace syndrome y'know.
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Daoist351057
I really really love your story more chapters please........................................................................................
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Nathan_traduction
Good fanfiction a original story you must continue
To frite this story i am waiting for the next chapter and the chapter after that i sang to know the end
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LifelessMan
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Zev_Blank
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Vinay85
Until now is one of the best One piece fanfict novel. Great Job Author.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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666Daoist
Best One Piece fan-fic ever out there. really love especially the vo.... *cough* anyway I 1000000% recommend this!!
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Swee2Pea
Love it! I will follow his journey through the story. Never drop it please! πββοΈπββοΈπββοΈπββοΈπββοΈπββοΈπββοΈπββοΈπββοΈπββοΈπββοΈπββοΈπββοΈ
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Viata44
Good story... Good story... Good story... Good story... Good story... Good story... Good story... Good story... Good story... Good story...
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amogusxd
The backstory was really amazing.
I hope the author won't abandon it, this story has a lot of potential!
More chapters!!!More chapters!!!More chapters!!!More chapters!!!More chapters!!!More chapters!!!
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COMPAL
I love it and i love you
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longchicken888
I love this FanFiction. Is there any way I can read more chapters earlier like Patreon. Itβs one of my favorites. Please donβt drop ππππ
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Rainbow_Phoenixx
Keep it up i love the uniqueness of the fan fic a reincarnation with out knowing its a fictional world and great background settingπππππ 5 Star
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Descentofpotential
Let's move him out of the training phase come on matey.
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Darkcultivater
best ..........................................................................................................................................................................
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Vinay85
What an amazing gem until now.. Very good , very good.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Descentofpotential
Good ****, like the idea, please update, Just do it
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i_am_grounded
Parappappapa... I'm lovin' it... Great work... πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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leo26
The novel up until chapter 7 is really good.The chapters are long,the grammar is good and the story is really well paced and fun to read.His devil fruit is also a mystical zoan which grant 's him the power of leviathan which is really cool by the way.So if you are looking for a good read , this is what you need. Hope the author keeps up the good work.πππ
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moises_vahn
The new best fan-fic.ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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oceansage
Just 4 chapters are enough to convince any reader that
If not best, it definitely is in top 3 fanfiction that anyone has ever read
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KoroSensei14
I like weβre this is heading itβs really well written and has good character development (prologue) and the mcβs personality and past are awesome. Hopefully he trains with the former Rogers crew member and learns haki and how to control his Devil fruit and maybe even some of the marine movies. Itβd be cool if he learned about the history disscused in this list chapter two but not about the specifics of the war and heβd have to find out about that himself by going to raftel. It looks like you already have shirahoshi as the main love interest based on the tags but if you decide to got small harem route like 2-3 members you should add robin depending on when In the timeline since she shares the same interest as the giant whoβll probably raise the mc even though heβs mentally mature since he needs to learn about the world and if he learns how to read poneyglyph then they will be some of the only people in the world able to and will have something in common. hopefully heβs also a couple years older then luffy to and realizes heβs in the one piece world and remembers a little about it to but didnβt realize it because he only knows about names like gol d Roger and a few other names or plot things but not many details like Devil fruits.
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torrelsav1
I can honestly say that this although doesn't have much chapters is the best one piece fanfic plot and development wise the mc starts of knowing nothing of one piece so thank god we don't get another mc going for that lightning devilfruit am I right lol
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