Reviews of Universe Tales: Virtual Log of the Fallen One by xxAlter - Webnovel

Well where shoud I start... The writing quality is polished with finess that I find no major issues with the grammer what so ever... The fact that you added Gore and Violence to a VR novel is very appealing easpecially because I've grown sick and tired of reading novels that pixelate monsters when they die. Its a VR novel with a clutz little girl for an MC.... The character development is brimming with potential with how the MC currently is... The world Building is amazing, I have no stupid critics about it... The fact that it has a lot of universe instead of a single giant continent filled with races is also a very great add. All in All 10/10 keep up the Great work Author..

Good story enjoying Maria so far. Kind of love the air headed moments and along with the fact that she is getting the hang of how things work in the game. Love the no romance OP female lead. Kind of wish I can find more novels/fan-fics with female lead that have no romance. Anyways, the world background is great it just gets better the more chapters come out. Maria, herself, is a great character so far. Also, with the side characters have their own character design that you can see throughout the story. Besides Zack I just don’t like him. Stay away from Maria, hmph. Horny little kid. Haha, I wish there was more chapters so I can read more. Keep up the good work so far. Also, I don’t see why there was like 8 chapters, or however many there was, over Maria getting magic. Was kind of unnecessary.

great read with a no romance female lead I have only seen a no romance female lead done well twice maybe three times this book, [maiden of the splitting moon] and [nanomancer reborn] depending on how you classify the current state of that book. author please don't drop. also please put a schedule for uploads or when you will be upload next.

love it PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP [img=update][img=update][img=update]

I really like this novel, the story development is good, the airhead female lead is cute and her pets is great for reminding her some stuff . (my opinion)

Soooooooooooooooooo good. I had some expectations due to reading some of the reviews beforehand and lets say I was not disappointed👍👍👍 Good job author, keep up the good work:)

Sooo... I really love this book! It has refined grammar, unlike some of the trash tier grammar I have seen from other books with the excuse of English not being their first language. The story development is really good, and we get to see the protagonist Maria go from being a loveable klutz to a mature war goddess. I also really love that when making this VRMMORPG, the author didn't go with the standard 'MC travels back in time, and is poor and gets really rich and knows how the game will go.' I also like how the protagonist comes from a good background, but actually uses it instead of the cliche 'I can't rely on my background.' The world background is really good because it actually makes sense. Usually, you get continents with tons of different species. The idea of having multiple planets and the levels on the planets gets higher is a really smart plan for future arcs. The character design is amazing because the characters are like actual people, and there isn't any 'NPCs are basically humans' garbage. The story development is really good, and I love how the author sets up foundations for the future plots. Overall, a very great book. The only thing I have to nitpick about it is that the update time sucks. I am giving this book a 5 star, but honestly, the update stability deserves a negative review. I heavily recommend!

The story is interesting and comedic as the FL is sometimes dumb but I hope she becomes smarter and has more character interaction with NPCs and her loyal followers. I enjoy the story very much and the writing quality is easy to read and understand compared to some authors who are too lazy to fix their own mistakes ask their readers to fix them. I hope you can upload more or even daily but if you can't just keep it up. Also, you should really start her own religion and church...heheeheh... Anyway overall great novel!!!! (P.S. try changing your novel thumbnail/cover, also how often do you update this novel?, )

The story is quite good as are the characters of the story. I like how The MC is often dragged into quests that people her level shouldn't be doing. I also can't wait for more of the story to be posted. This is also one of the better books I have read with little error

I just love Maria’s personality because it adds so much more to the plot. Also in the beginning how the system confused me, but now I understand it.

This novel may not be a critical madterpiece, but it is such a fun read. No need to decipher bad grammar, as it’s written quite well. Story progresses a little quickly but it’s not hard to grasp what’s going on. I like the character development of the MC, side characters are a bit left out though. My only real complaint as of 97 chapters in... theres only 97 chapters. 1 update a week hurts my soul because I really like this novel and cant wait to find out more.

its actually pretty good if i say myself though im more into reincarnation,isekai,etc i like marias personality and how shes stupid sometimes (how would it be if maria transported into the game world similarly like overlord)

Great story. I especially like the chapters from the other characters pov, and it shows off just how overpowered the main character is. the main character is very likeable too.

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This is one of few stories that i keep coming back to no matter how long the wait, even though it's like killing me slowly... The storyline is good, the characters got personality , the background of the gaming world is at its finest and the real world is like a secondary objective... VRMMO at its best can't wait for it to update its like forever ... It's really killing me... I saw it in Royal Road and ended up here for more chaps... Still waiting for more...

I want more, seriously this novel is just so fun to read!!! It strikes all the good spots, she got over the ''i was eaten alive piece by piece by a pack of hungry wolves'' a little too faast but it's better than making unnecessary drama over it... Need More Chapters!!!

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Uhm where should I start... First I really love the personality of the characters mostly the mc. I love airheaded funny characters that charges into stuff. The story development is just right for me, it isn't too slow or too fast and lastly the background of the story whatever you call it, it's understandable rather than random names popping outta nowhere wondering who the hell they were. Overall it's a good novel and a must read if you like characters like the shield girl from itai no wa or mmo type novels.

well this is pretty fun to read and has a lot of potential but one thing that annoy me is that she is such an airhead I KNOW this is her charm or character settings because she never played any games but like hell why don't you study and research more about the games so you will understand she is a 'smart', 'genius' but never think of something like that the clumsiness of her is okay but her knowledge should atleast be better than 10-30% of the players

Loved the storyline. Especially all the random quests Maria get's dragged into. The storyline is never dull or boring and when it does, Maria gets dragged into some other shenanigans.

this is one of few stories that i keep coming back to no matter how long the wait, even though it's like killing me slowly... . The storyline is good, the characters got personality , the background of the gaming world is at its finest and the real world is like a secondary objective .. VRMMO at its best can't wait for it to update its like forever ..

I wouldn't usually rate the story this low because I in fact enjoyed this story a fair bit. I rly liked how different it was to the usual story. Could have used more work but was still a decent story. However, this call changes once she meets the vampire and the series of events that followed. It has honestly utterly destroyed everything you liked about the story. I'm literally astonished, I have never seen an author capable of destroying his own story so badly... The main reason she plays the game is to be with her friends and have a fun time, also to make new friends. This, however, is comply forgot by the author and turned into a story about making the mc god-tier who is hated by everyone turning her into a monster... The very core that is the mc is taken way over the top and then destroyed. There is so much more but I'll leave it at this cause I am honestly still astonished at what happened. Read until the vamp is introduced then I would just drop. That is around chap 60? If want a long binge then don't bother. Buy yeah... gl author I guess?

This is a great book. The story line is the best and the characters are just so funny! I can't wait for it to post more chapters because I am getting increasingly bored the longer I wait without reading this series.

This is a great book. The story line is the best and the characters are just so funny! I can't wait for it to post more chapters because I am getting increasingly bored the longer I wait without reading this series.

Definitely a fun read you shoukd check out. The only problem for the book imo is the lack of updates, because you always want more. If you think youll like it you probably will.

Dark of night and waxing moon come to us a single pool hear us sing our witches' song and send us moonlight clear and strong Earth and water, wind and fire one and all you must conspire to banish bad for goodness sake cos I need moonshine for my cake Weary travelers long ago shared their bread and made a vow that they will be forever friends and so shall be until time ends