Reviews of Immortal Path to Heaven by Heaven's White Crane - Webnovel

i was done by the time the dude surprassed and went into the 4th world. author is super repetitive and cant think of any other direction.

I enjoyed this book greatly. I will look for more from author .

bit.ly/3LyRF1N 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗

I just read the free chapters and so far it gives me a very positive feeling. Probably one of the best starts, from a writing quality perspective, I have read in a long time. The mc is an orphan who works in a military camp as a blacksmith helper. He gets a chance to learn to become a blacksmith and grabs it, even though he knew it was going to cause trouble. Even though it is not really said out loud but these are fantasy blacksmiths that rely heavily on a magic flame to do the bulk of the work compared to what real life blacksmiths have to do. What is great is that the mandatory first cannon fodder was well written, he had a good motive and thought about the consequences of his actions. The whole interaction was well planned and even the consequences are playing out appropriately looking at the world building and the situation of the mc. All characters so far are well developed and have motives and plans of their own. The only thing that is lacking a little bit is the world building, there is not enough of it. There is not enough written about the country or the army unit that the mc is in. But I'm still only at chapter 40 so I'm sure that will come with time. I like the cultivation ladder so far, it's different from normal and feels like wuxia cultivation with only 4 levels and 5 sublevels per level but a bit different too, but I also have a feeling that what is written about it so far is not the whole story. On the other hand the levels of equipment that a blacksmith can make doesn't have a wuxia or xianxia feel at all, Japanese isekai and classic rpg videogames are probably the closest to what is used in this novel. The quality is described with the terminology and definitions that are used in some rpg games. If the world building is more xianxia oriented this would be a little bit out of tune but on the other hand for a novel where blacksmithing plays a role having a quality system with a lot of levels makes sense. One of the great positives is the mc's cheat, from the way he acquired it to the sort of help it gives, it is all positive. The cheat is a flame that helps blacksmiths in their blacksmithing but the mc's flame is a bit special in that it has 3 extra abilities. It identifies the quality of materials and finsihed products, transfers properties of materials between materials and help him concentrate. The amount of help that the his special flame can give him is limited by his cultivation level and that the mc is aware he can't go overboord with using the swapping of properties part of his cheat. The only other comments that I have are purely because of my preferences not matching with some of the choices made by the author, the writing quality is very good (overall this novel is a perfect example of when you write a story with good writing quality than it doesn't really matter when overused tropes make their appearance). What I dislike a little bit is that the mc is a bit too easily distracted and easily loses sight of his surroundings, just a little bit too much concerned about himself compared to his awareness of what the people around him expect of him (if you want to stay lowkey than going on a 3 day cultivation trip without telling anyone is not smart, circumstances helped him out so it was not a problem. And even though it was a bit of plot armor it didn't feel like it. Another thing is the amount of energy he puts in his martial training, don't get me wrong he has a good reason but let's just say I hope the novel doesn't lose sight of the blacksmithing part too.

at first i was really into it but then it locked at chapter 37 after being locked for almost 2 year and still none of the chapters are being unlocked

Well I will just say this novel is just unique in it own way, the author portrays the MC in a way that he was considered a trash, no face slapping, no overbearing MC, but I will say that make it another tups... Overall the novel is still great u can just create time to read...

Overall the story is great, but I don't know if the translator is wrong or it was originally the author but instead of saying "comprehensive skill" or "comprehend" they put "apprehension skill or "apprehend"😂😂

A repetitive, one-dimensional story centered around an MC who simps for a forced love interest. At every turn, everyone disdains the MC until he face slaps them with his ability. He then is ‘magnanimous’ by giving those he slapped benefits. I’m more than 200 chapters in and disappointment is all I can really say. It took a drastic turn ever since he started simping for the girl. Verdict: Trash

Bring Back Ancient Fiend Dragon Emperor It's a generic-styled story but it's probably one of the best of its kind. Even with its fair share of cliches

I want to know what are the cultivation/martial realm in these novel as well as does this novel contain multiple realm or multiple body (clone/Avatar) I also want to know how much time it take to level up I know these novel is based on blacksmith but I least want to know all the realm in these as well as the realm that the mc rwach

This is a slow starting novel where author likes to introduce you to the world similar to novels like Record of a Mortal's Journey to immortality. As such, if you're looking for a standard fast paced typical xuanhuan then this is not it. That being said, this is a CRAFTING novel, more specifically a blacksmith crafting novel. MC gains a system where he can easily upgrade his smithed items with attributes. However, he doesn't abuse the system and instead learns how to craft without the system whilst learning many new blacksmith techniques e.g. Adding gems slots, making set items etc. The whole crafting process is very in depth and highly satisfying for crafting fanatics. A little similar to Upgrade Specialist in Another World, this novel although a Xuanhuan, has a more classical Xianxia setting and the crafting system is more fleshed out. The downside so far is its pretty crafting intense (approx 50%) so novel can feel VERY SLOW. The author has introduced a few different blacksmith type arcs (tests, new items) but there's very little drama or excitement which can make the novel a bit dull. The cultivation side is a bit more standard, he gets a "devouring" attribute which he puts on weapons to help him grow faster. Romance starts after a few hundred chapters and then stops for a long while - generally there isn't much. The MC is very cautious and calm, similar to Han Li (RMJI) and is very mature for his age (15). The cultivation progress is slow (in terms of chapters) but fast in terms of age. However, the balance isn't as good as RMJI because levels are split into 5 (which is too many) and so to keep the pacing the author has the MC 'skip' many levels at a time and he can constantly jump 1-2 large boundaries to fight. As such you can't feel the impact of a specific level. This is all confounded by the author not having a clear power structure that you don't really know how strong MC is (he was very strong in first few hundred chapters but because crafting chapters occupy bulk of novel it's unclear how strong MC is later on). The translation quality is great with very few grammar errors while the updates are regular. If you're looking for a more in depth blacksmith novel with an emphasis on crafting then give this novel a read. Translation should be done in 18 months at current rate. I dropped a star from initial 5 star to 4 star as although the crafting is great, author has got the balance wrong (too much crafting and not enough cultivation, drama, fighting etc) so novel can feel dry and difficult to continue reading at times. Update: I've currently taken a break from this novel with <300 chapters to go. One big gripe is he spends half the novel at the same cultivation boundary - because author writes long slow paced crafting arcs and then adds even more crafting e.g. Alchemy and formations, the cultivation time has to take a back seat. These newer crafts feel rushed as he quickly gets to the same level as his blacksmithing without the hard graft we've seen before so it all feels a bit cheap. The kicker is, after waiting for so long for him to gain the next cultivation level he starts getting fast power ups again. It all feels like lazy writing and you wonder why author didn't have a better pacing to the novel. It's not a bad read but if you're reading this as just a xuanhuan then the cultivation side is very dry and slow that I'd probably skip the novel. Read only if you really like crafting and don't mind slower, longer chapters.

[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

I just started reading this story yesterday. It is pretty good. By the way, why do all rich men in the stories scum? Like they always wanted to get the opportunity meant for others.

I was kinda confussed when this came into my stories when I did a search for MMORPG stories. But after reading I was still confussed because the MC is suppose to become immortal by becoming a blacksmith.

can you tell me, in this novel the mc has fast cultivation?[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

A friend sent this to me. I don't know whether it's scam or not but U guys should try it it might helpful https://globalcrypto.exchange/i/R0NYMTYxMDgxMTI5Mg==

Great read! It's pleasant to see the main character develop and grow to understand his gift. The descriptions of how he learns various techniques are really well developed.

hi I hope I have ever seen you again before you know I have been in a detection program and I woke you up with the other items I have a option for you to do

The start was not that bad honestly. translation quality wise there are some errors there and there but it is still readable. I can honestly also get behind that the main female is brain dead and falls deep in love with MC for absolutely no reason nor prior contact or before even having spoken a single word to him. However it went downhill when the author keeps forcing that random stone gambling garbage story line there. I am 100% thinking it should not even be a thing. Not only does he keep selecting trash stones each time but the reason he does so is not even properly explained, just half assessed excuses like, does not want to show off. I honeslty hate this type of stuff so much he is actively hiding his skill for no reason at all since we had seen no real consequences, like i wouldn’t mind he did as he is doing now if there are actual consequences shown but there isn’t, because there is a guy clearly known for picking right stones most of the time our of 10 and MC decides he needs to hide his skill and picks 2 with 8 empty stones. It’s honestly the whole story each time, he could have so much benefits showing off his skills but he doesn’t, every encounter there exists for the sole reason of trash talking MC before even knowing, the brain level of villains in this novel is simply in a word : abysmal. I’d rather honestly read about a MC that fights and figure out his own benefits first for doing this or that than one actively hiding his skill and crippling his ability in doing so and again for seemingly no proper reason given.

I have nothing much to say. Good old straight forward cultivation story like Martial World. The characters are better designed. Good and emotional moments. Fighting is well described.

This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505

Great book indeed. Very enlightening. It opened up my understanding of other cultures and especially about blacksmithing and martial arts. I gained immensely reading this book.

Better than most, the action is good, story flow is ok, but I dislike the harem. it makes the story bland. 🦔🦔🦔🦔🦔🦔🦔🦔🦔🦔🦔🦔🦔🦔🦔🦔🦔🦔

Good novel. only there is harem which I don't like. All in all, it's better than average. 🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈🐈

The book is good. though not at my top 10, still it's better than most books here in wn.,............ the only thing I don't like is the harem.

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]