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YIANUWANGXIAO
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Readoholic
I have finished volume one : Lost Dream of a Young Lumberjack and already liking the MC Ryne character a lot.
The story is well planned and narration is exemplary. I am absolutely going to keep reading this story. Keep up the good work. :)
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GloriouslyFamous
A well thought out story with a great plot.
The story and plot flow smoothly. The characters are very dynamic and well made, and they tie the story together. The MC, Ryne has a distinct character and is very likeable. The dialogues are well written. I also like his friend Gard he seems quite wise oddly. Sophilia is another interesting character. I think the story will have a great future and I can not wait to read more. Well done!
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Miao_Miao_2769
I love how the author portrays the characters in his story. Ryne is so strong for a young boy! I'm very impressed. I wish I could be like Ryne too hehehe~
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NOLONGERAUSER
I think the story flows really well, very interesting, definitely a good read, can't wait to see what the author does with it later on, I think it's going in a good direction so far. A long read, but a good one that pulls you in enough to make want to know what else is going to happen all in all. A very good story!
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Eat_IT
I think the series holds a lot of potential. Regardless of my personal skills as a writer, I've perused a variety of works online and offline, and I find your work to be pretty solid.
I have but one suggestion of my own. I feel your talents are better spent aiming for independent release or release as a series of books online or in stores, rather than as a series of Arcs detailed in a Webnovel format.
This is simply because the nature of your work, in my belief, would be better represented through the structure of physical or digital novels.
But hey, you do what you wanna do, this is just a suggestion on my part.
I just feel your frequency of updates and revisions alongside the content size of each update lends itself better to a book series format.
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Darlene_Virginia
The background is formed nicely. The story flow is smooth. The character formation is powerful. I would read more chapters in the future. Happy writing!!
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ZephyrIsMe
The story has rich descriptions that are good in my opinion as it helps readers in imagining the story. The story also flows very smoothly. Writing quality though not perfect is good enough. The stability of updates, story development, character design, and world background is good for me.
Keep going and writes to your heart content :)
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Blackturtle
The last spark of dark fire. I love the focus on the writing, on the characters, on the storyline, and so on. The author creating a convincing illusion. Great skills here O_wolfs. ππ. Straight up to my encyclopedia. Hehehe.
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_VA_
The story has potential and seems interesting. There are also a lot of rich descriptions and good dialogues between characters. The world development is good and character designs aren't bad either. There are some moments in the novel that I feel like are so well written that they could be part of a top tier novel.
However, there are some very noticeable syntax errors such as dangling modifiers and missing commas. To improve the writing quality, the first thing I would suggest to the author is to use less repetitive words in your stories. To add on, stop using "glare" whenever two characters look at each other. There are some descriptive words that do not fit the situation/or do not make sense, yet are still used.
The characters are well thought out for the most part, but it feels kind of suspicious that the two main characters get along so well with no grudges or anything after she accused him and he broke her jewelry.
In addition, there were a lot of coincidences and the storyline just progressed way too fast, with no plateau to digest the information at all. I honestly think that the first volume could've been fleshed out into a good 100 chapters instead of 10, and it would've been very interesting.
Good luck writing! :)
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DuskArcanist
Writing style stands out in this one, as it flows really smoothly, and progresses the story on in a good pace. Lots of descriptions which makes it a pretty vivid read amongst other things. Keep up the work!
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coffeemugssshot
There is not much I can say for now about the novel, but judging from the chapters released, this is a good story.
The MC is well established and also the world background.
I would be looking forward to how far the MC would grow and evolve into a hero.
Keep writing, author! Good luck.
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firiewww
The zero to hero concept is awesome and easy to get into the story. Cheering for you as you go to the next chapters, the three chapters was definitely already a good read. Its good!
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