Reviews of Love Unfolding by viLelouch - Webnovel

Hi there author, I am one of you fellow reader. I really really love your story, I love every single moment of the book, in truth I actually finish reading your book in just one day. I know this is really selfish of me, but I really NEED a 2 book. I hate bad ending( no offence ). I want Andy and Erika to be together. So author-san I am a bad person so please allow me to write Extra in FAN-FIC section. It will only be a few chapter (I promise that I try my best in wring that) English may not be my mother tongue but i will write like no tomoror Please have a read there. I think i will put it as Love unfolding( Extra)

Ahh what a book!! Really can’t wait for Vol. 2 to come out. That ending was just...my heart. I know some of these questions may be answered in the next volume, but figure I’ll ask them here for posterity sake: 1. Why hasn’t Andy told Erika who her family is? She wants Erika to be her wife but she isn’t telling her who she is. It’s not like she won’t find out eventually, and if her concern is about her only being there for the money, that’s clearly not the case. 2. She never told Erika that she knows Mei’s grandparents and their views on Alex being gay. That’s familial support for Erika, besides Mei who is also there. 3. I feel like this could help resolve some issues that Erika is having with coming out to her family. Yes, they may still be mad and possibly try to disown her, but she would have not only the support of Mei, her grandparents, and Andy, but Andy’s family and power as well. If there’s issues, she can train in Andy’s family’s business, since they operate In the same industry, solving her career crisis. I can see Andy being concerned about Erika coming out, especially with her going abroad for two years. Her parents are known to send her on blind dates and Andy is rightfully concerned what two years apart will do this early in the relationship. Erika’s proclivity to hide their relationship also worries Andy given how people will react to Erika being “single” (mixers, dates, etc). I can also understand Erika being anxious considering the treatment Alex received and not knowing that there is actual support behind her now. But Alex should’ve been able to show that Erika can still survive on her own. That’s my piece her at the end, waiting for the next volume to come out. It has been a rollercoaster but I’ve really enjoyed it. Thanks author!!

You can't do that to me! My fucking heart! I'm dying dude! The ending is too fucking sad! Please tell me there is a continuation! Please! I can't another sad lesbian story. I just can't!!!! But overall 9/10 would not read again unless I want to destroy my heart. Jk!

I read this all in one go. I can't express how amazing I feel you have portrayed the emotions throughout this novel. this novel has shown something pure and true pain at coming out. I love how it's always had this underlined problem with their relationship, and how it grew so big. I can't wait to see how this continues, I'm of the side that wishes for Erika too truly come out for Andy like I feel she deserves. she needs to understand that this fear will stop her from all future relationships. I want her to fix things before Andy can't be brought back, I feel as if Andy is broken and in need of the only person who truly makes her happy. I loved reading this and I won't lie the ending of this part really did bring tears, but I hope they can be like a phoenix in this and rise from the ashes to become better. absolutely loved reading this and do not for a second regret any of the lost sleep for reading this novel. so happy to have found this