Reviews of Dimensional Demonic Phoenix. by Fanfinir - Webnovel

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The fanfic was good saddly it was deleted !!! why!!! i hope you are going to re-upload it soon please!! +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Anyone know what happened to the chapters? Or did the author delete them. cause its showing 0 chaps for me

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nice npvel... i started rwading it after watching hanabi picture... ................. keep up the good work....................... nice npvel... i started rwading it after watching hanabi picture... ................. keep up the good work.......................

a mishmash of different characters all in one story with new ideas, action, romance, echii and some comedy. the chapters are a bit short but still worth reading.

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I am a simple man I see hanabi I give 5*

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1 star for writing quality *** (my English is sh** but atleast i know the difference between he, she, her, his 😑😑😑) *** ...............................

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Its a pitty the Story is not bad but the gramma and the confusion of the He and She gets really fucking anoying. And dear Arthor when you are using DXD things here there are no Demons on there Planet and in the Underworld they are Devils get this at less strait.

since chapter 41 seems boring to me first: suddenly everyone is in the harem, only hanabi and Ui earned their place, the others did not explain anything. Her personality changed to more perverted. When the moment arises when everyone realizes that he is playing with all the girls and is unfaithful to Ui, the only thing he says is: "As I am a demon, it is normal for me to have a harem" and everyone accepts it, Ui don't fight or anything, it just says that you have to try harder. The story does not advance, now it is only flirting with the girls. He's still the most devil of all

Thanks for this amazing novel the character growth of strength and the relationship with the people is amazing and the writing quality is super I would like to read more of this novel keep going

I love this fanfic so much! Keep it up author-san, you are doing great job! Though your grammatical errors are obvious, I believe that you be able to improve gradually but you're doing fine currently so keep up the good work.

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1/5 Grammar... Well, the author truly needs to get an editor, i had to reread some parts 3 to 5 times to understand what is being told to me 5/5 Update The Author writes very frequently but i would rather he reduces his update frequency and increases quality. Who cares if an author can throw out 100 chapters if it will cause eye and brain cancer? 4/5 Story Not bad, it makes uses all kind of stories and tries to mesh them together, sometimes it comes out well... sometimes... well, try better next time. 3/5 Character Design Not much improvement here and mainly use how the characters are from the original source 2/5 World Background... Try to increase the amount of details of the surroundings

Great novel. This story had a great start but slowly author started to add too many different characters from different anime's as crossover making the whole world as a mess. Plot is not cleared till yet.There is Only slice of life, romance, and mature scenes, comedy in it

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