It wasn't until my second read through that I noticed that Snape knows Harry is present and smirks. Likely going to wait by the whopping willow tree entrance to get them since the blood debt only made him leave that area
I got a great suggestion for the author :
How about you make harry develop a new branch of occlumency , or magic in general ???
That path of magic will focus on controlling the body functions and making the body more durable ....
It can be achieved by using Occlumency to control the emotions , thus using this connection to try and control emotions by controlling the secretion of emotion-controlling enzymes ....
Effectively controlling part of the brain & some glands ....
Then , he can begin trying to consciously control the secretion of :
1) Endorphine (relieves pain & enhances the physique a bit) &
2) Adrenaline (excites the brain & heart , giving something like bullet-time reaction speed , and getting some strong levels of enhanced strength) &
3) Growth Hormones ( so that he can control his growth to the maximum efficiency and effectiveness)
Then , he can start on controlling his organs , his voice (mimic different voices) , ....
Enhancing his muscles & bones & nerves & blood veins and arteries and blood flow... making them wider & denser & stronger ....giving him enhanced durability &strength & agility & reaction speed ....
Also , he can use his research on DNA & DNA altering magic / science .... then he can infude useful bits of DNA to grant himself various abilities ....
Metamorph , several animagus forms , ability to talk to many kinds of animals ....
Normal human mutated beneficial abilities (they exist) such as :-* ability to withstand not-sleeping , being enough with about 3 hours of sleep
* ability to withstand heat & fire
* ability to withstand shock & electricity
* strong stamina (not getting tired easily)
* muscle form inborn (don't remember the name .... they basically get the best muscle form without needing to do any exercises , it can allow him to keep in shape infinitely)
* Great lungs ( can store large amounts of air , and can dive for a long time)
Maybe , a large 'tool' ???
'Tool' = D&$k
It's kind of annoying how Harry isn't getting involved in anything and just watches as it happens. At this point, it's basically the books with a few little changes to accommodate James and Lily being alive.
(Google Translator Sorry for errors)
thank you for the Chapter and for your hard work. look, I understand ok? his parents were murdered, it was the Potter or Dumbledore or both, but that is no reason to enjoy the suffering of others. Syrians did nothing for the MC and the lupine was at best negligent. Am I not saying that the MC should forgive everything, but find their suffering amusing? disgusting, very disgusting. Marcus, he is arrogant and a bit of an idiot, but he was raised like that and in that Marcus' pov about the first meeting with the MC he seems genuinely confused by the fact that the MC doesn't care about his status. he never had to deal with it because he was created that way. it is shown that he really wanted to be closer to his brother, but the MC's anger and indifference along with Marcus' justified but obviously wrong arrogance got in the way. let's remember that part of the reason for most of these types of problems in HP fanfics is the ignorance of the magical world, the sheep mentality, but there is the side of the MC that usually makes fun of this type of thing ignoring the fact that they are children who don't have many example types. besides, the MC just leaves everyone saying that they are idiots without even trying to talk, because it takes time, or because they are inferior or some kind of shit. despite all this, I understand that this is a story of abandonment and that is usually the norm, in general the story is. incredible, but it’s in those parts that makes me angry.